Slips of Spring

an icicle
drip, drip, dripping away
slips of spring

sunlight gleams
winter garb cast aside
petticoats flash

rays of gold
glistening on the glen
flicks of foxtails

mewling mouths
nuzzle at their mother
come spring



[“petticoats” in this instance are meant to signify 
glistening white snow, hidden beneath gray snow banks, 
and exposed suddenly by early spring sunshine.]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/24/2011 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations Deb, on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:16:00 PM
Simply breath-takingly beautiful, Deb. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/15/2011 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations for winning with these haikus. I knew they were winners the first time I saw them.
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Date: 2/15/2011 12:17:00 PM
Deb, Congratulations on your win in the string contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2011 8:52:00 AM
Deb, these are all wonderful, love them. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:44:00 PM
oh, here is a darling one i had missed seeing earlier. Wow, this one gets the award for alliteration in a haiku series and the title is really great for this one. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:05:00 PM
soaking in the beauty of your kus, deb.. my BIG CONGRATS to you..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:47:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your super win in the string Haiku contest with this brilliant beauty my friend.. enjoy ..luv..
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:29:00 PM
Congratulations Deb on your poem's honored wind. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:12:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your win in this contest!Enjoyed your Haikus.
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:11:00 PM
Congratultions on the well deserved win in the contest, deb
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations for your great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:53:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work that you have penned..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Your comments were a ray of delight..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:38:00 PM
Such a cute image of the baby foxes you created in your string haiku, Deb. Wishing you the best in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:45:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Deb. Lainie
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Date: 2/3/2011 7:48:00 PM
Thanks for the explanation at the bottom. All of these haiku collectively render fine descriptiveness.
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Date: 2/3/2011 5:12:00 PM
a good string of haiku's, enjoyed your write Deb,..p.d.
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Date: 2/3/2011 2:24:00 PM
Nice group of Haiku's my dear Deb... missed your poetry latley, hope your well ..luv Michael
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