Slipping

Slipping Slipping sliding slipping sliding , Riding brown mare she is sweet. Skin like velvet riding riding , Sweating sweating passions heat. Springing forward riding riding , Exhilaration sweeps, Slipping sliding forever riding , Riding bareback, she makes me complete. Swimming swimming in the wetness, Flowing flowing like the wine, Swimming swimming in the river, Wonderful the horse I’m riding, Cantering she is sublime? Was trying to sleep , Brain going cheep cheap? Don Johnson 4am offering

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Don Johnson

Date: 6/9/2011 4:23:00 PM

Dreams play a big part in our balance, tween sanity or not, Up rides Liberty Valance, n John Wayne has him shot :) Thanks Joe and Ralph n the Sweetheart too, n Sarah Kendrik won't be blue

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/9/2011 4:17:00 PM

Excellent piece, Don. Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Have a great weekend. Best to you and yours, mate! Ralph

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/9/2011 1:07:00 PM

Good to read you today Don, i wonder y'know why dreams seem so real sometimes.. a 7..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/9/2011 9:55:00 AM

well another super duper write DON and this horse seems a little lazy luv but u are enjoying ride still.. oh ..the ride is awesome sometimes..haha.. good luck in the contest.. another wow wow..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2011 7:31:00 AM

Interesting work that demurely says passion...Enjoyed reading this morn..Your presence at my work was understanding..We had Rocky, rat terrier, for fourteen years and three months..Princess' presence helps to ease the pain..I think of Rocky everyday..Sara