Slippery Slide

Slippery slide


An indigent man from Calcutta
Would bathe once a week in some butter
A slippery mistake
He walked over a grate
And forever was lost down the gutter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Flats Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Top shelf lim'rik!!! Enjoyed ~ j
Norwood Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 12:38 PM
thanks
Callus Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Ha ha...I like your humour, Grant:) Very creative. Congrats on a fine win. // paul
Norwood Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 4:47 PM
thanks Paul, appreciate the comment
Canerdy Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Love it--a 7! Congrats, Grant! Janice
Norwood Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 4:47 PM
7 out of 10? Thanks for the comment.
Scars Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 9:10 AM
hehehe great one Grant :) Congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Norwood Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 4:48 PM
cheers, pleased you enjoyed it.
May Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 8:09 AM
haha...Very nice limerick...enjoyed...Congrats on your win!
Norwood Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 4:48 PM
thanks for the comment Joseph
White Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 3:40 AM
Congratulations! (Coming back to say that to you :) )
Norwood Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 4:49 PM
thank you Darren
Y. Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 7:51 PM
Hi Grant, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
Norwood Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Thank you
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Great limerick Grant, your syllable count was slightly off. Many congrats on your 2nd place :-) hugs Jan xx
Norwood Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Thanks Jan & thank you for a fun competition
White Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 12:17 AM
I'll make sure never to walk over a grate... Funny one :) Good luck!
Norwood Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Ha ha. Thanks
Y. Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 12:32 AM
LoI! This is funny. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Norwood Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Thanks. I love limericks, have written quite a few
Turner Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 12:04 PM
I like your style, Grant. great limerick!
Norwood Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 2:54 PM
thank you Daniel, appreciate the comment.
Smith Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:55 AM
lol...awesome
Norwood Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 2:56 PM
cheers Tim
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