Slippery Reins

Once when I was a child
My reins were held by my parents
This pony once led by their rants 

Now that my mustang is old
My reins still slip from my grasp
I go where this beast goes

Divorced from my old mare
I am no longer noosed
Years of service make it wary

When my child returns at half-time
He takes my reins playfully
Taming my mustang without a whine

When he dismounts for her
I lose sight of my destination
Someday, I'll bridle without a bother

Then I won’t be ridden by my beast
The saddle will find its place
Someday my racing heart will cease 

Together we’ll limp to the finish line
Our eyes on the journey before us
Not fixing my gaze side to side

This bronco will find its stride
Confident in my equestrian skills
I’ll cross the line in an easy ride

Then no longer reign or be reined
Ready for the glue factory in style
As Jesus cries he is finished
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 9:29 AM
wow, great extended metaphor here, Triny. Very well done.
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