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When velvet night throbs with moonglow , our language of whispers speaks about a new time-- and in-between stillness, lines unravel into charmed musings: In this place, I allow this gift of warm anticipation to open my soul’s voice marking ardor's pledge, a fateful roam along new trails, uncertain yet enticed : Somehow, rosy morn abides bringing a thrill on our pressed lips this tender quiver from one caress slip-slides down, down through our veins as we greet the beginnings of our bond, until joyful sighs burst with daybreak and mist... where velvet eyes explore a different realm. Falling Poetry Contest, Kai Michael Neumann 5/26/2020

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Date: 6/5/2020 4:53:00 AM
I love poetry like this that makes me take a breathy sigh Nette! Just gorgeous penning! Congratulations on your deserving win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/1/2020 7:40:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Likewise, thanks for your uplifting comments, and my placement in your sponsored contest. I do admire your inspiring pieces. Keep sharing your talent. Salamat. God bless you.
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Date: 6/1/2020 4:20:00 PM
This is so beautiful Nette! Love the imagery, the soothing effect your words have on me and the flow of words enchanting like waves. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/1/2020 8:55:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Nette. Janice
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Date: 6/1/2020 5:52:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations on your win in my contest, Kai
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Date: 5/26/2020 3:00:00 PM
Hello Nette, this is so beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 5/26/2020 8:55:00 AM
Imagine having that every day you wake up...A lovely write Nette...All the best
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Date: 5/26/2020 7:09:00 AM
Very enticing poetry, Nette, great sensuality.
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Date: 5/26/2020 5:04:00 AM
Stunningly inscribed with a cadence of gentleness and ease. Top-rate poem, Nette and thanks to you for a placement in your contest.
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Date: 5/25/2020 4:37:00 PM
I always love your first lines in your poems as they are always so amazing.... What a way to open another great poem full of vivid imagery... you always take the reader to a different place..
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Date: 5/25/2020 4:27:00 PM
Very romantic verse Nette, Good to see you posting again. Not sure if we'll be jetting off this year, I've got itchy feet, raring to go lol. Tom
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