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Slinky (My First Senryu)

My childhood was like a brand-new Slinky tangled irreparable ©Danielle White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/21/2009 3:10:00 PM
RATS! FOILED AGAIN! (LOL). See your SoupMail Barb. ***Danielle****
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Date: 7/21/2009 2:31:00 PM
Danielle, this is super..very descriptive. I think it is a Senyru...well done. BG
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