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8/6/2025

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pursuing my goals one step ahead two behind … life’s moonwalk

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I Am Anaya

Date: 8/7/2025 1:38:00 PM

Keen Senryu a fabulous image as well! Fun fact: Tap dancer Bill Bailey's sliding backstep in 1955 may have been the first. Love this!__Anaya

Mark Toney
Date: 8/7/2025 4:31:00 PM

Bill Bailey’s backslide, Apollo Theater, New York, 1955. Great comment, Anaya!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/7/2025 11:27:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun "slide" write. You told my story in 3 lines. Hooray!!! Great Picture... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............

Mark Toney
Date: 8/7/2025 4:16:00 PM

I’m glad you liked it, Paula!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2025 9:09:00 AM

Oh, I love this . It's so so true!!

Mark Toney
Date: 8/7/2025 9:11:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea!