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Slice of Paradise, Cooled - Ty

Giver ... 

          Sliver ...
                    
                    Quiver ...

                              Shiver ...

Crescent moon, light giver - sliver, just ...

                    Dusk's cool breath, palms quiver, shiver ... gust.





~ 1st Place ~  in the "Your Turn For A Tyburn" Poetry Contest, Charles Messina, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Write Me A Tyburn" Poetry Contest, Kim Rodrigues, Judge & Sponsor.

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Lonna Blodgett

Date: 9/6/2019 11:02:00 PM

What a glimmering perspective - from Giver to Gust! Love this one. Lonna

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2019 6:52:00 PM

I just noticed i had already congratulated yours . Oh gosh, I hope I am not going through the entire list re-congratulating people!! I better check that out!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2019 6:46:00 PM

ooh la la la, Gregory. Congrats on your awesome win.

Charles Messina

Date: 8/31/2019 5:06:00 AM

Greg, this is a GREAT tyburn. You always seem to hit the nail on the head in my contests. Keep it going my friend. Congratulations on your 1st place win!Your poetry is awesome! Blessings...Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2019 7:32:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tyburn poem, Gregory :) - Hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 8/29/2019 3:11:00 PM

When I read something like this, I see my English is useless. I'd rather learn Latin. Congrats, Gregory)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 2/3/2018 12:52:00 PM

I missed this one! A treat for the senses. Congratulations on your win! Muchos hugs <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:47:00 PM

Gracias, mi amiga ... I greatly appreciate it! <3

Jean Murray

Date: 2/2/2018 1:32:00 PM

Greg, you're a hard act to follow. No wonder you are in the top ten contest poets.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 8:46:00 PM

Oh, that's very sweet of you, Jean, and I so appreciate your kindness, my friend ... blessings! :-) <3

Eve Roper

Date: 2/1/2018 8:41:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Gregory, congratulations on this great piece :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 10:03:00 PM

Many kind and appreciated thanks to you, Eve ... blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/1/2018 8:06:00 PM

Beautiful tyburn. Congrats on your win, Gregory.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 10:02:00 PM

That's very kind of you, Line - thank you muchly! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2018 7:56:00 PM

So glad to see this on the list.A very well deserved win, my friend. I really should have put a title on mine!!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 10:02:00 PM

Thank you, Buddy - so appreciated! Oh, dear - you didn't put a title on??

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/1/2018 6:44:00 PM

Use of great rhymes in your Tyburn, Gregory, that image a wonderful scene in so few words. Love your gif too! Congrats on your First Place win. Sandra :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 10:01:00 PM

Thank you very kindly, Sandra, I'm so glad you liked my Tyburn! Blessings to you, my sweet friend! :-) <3

Curtis Moorman

Date: 2/1/2018 5:56:00 PM

I can easily see why I notice your name in 1st place a lot. You have a brilliant talent, my friend! Congratulations on your 1st place win.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 10:00:00 PM

Thank you very much, Curtis, that's so kind of you, my friend ... and we will be seeing YOUR name on many winners' lists in the months to come, I'm sure. Blessings to you! :-)

Viv Wigley

Date: 2/1/2018 5:02:00 PM

Congrats, Gregory, on a very atmospheric Tyburn. Regards, viv

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 9:57:00 PM

That's so kind of you, Viv - thanks so much, my friend! :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 2/1/2018 3:53:00 PM

This is beautiful; an excellent example of this tricky form, Greg. Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 9:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul, I so appreciate the kindness, my friend! :-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/1/2018 2:23:00 PM

A lovely tyburn, Greg! Congrats on 1st place!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2018 9:56:00 PM

I'm so pleased you enjoyed my first Tyburn, Kim, and I thank you for the opportunity to learn a new form, and have fun doing so! I'm honored and humbled to be on a list with such fine fellow poets! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2018 8:29:00 PM

ooh la la la. I LOVE this one AND the picture. I am seeing many poets not rhyming both syllables, but for me, I think it's much better to do complete rhymes on the two syllable words and am glad to see you did it that way. I tried to catch up on Soupmails to you, so be sure to see them all!!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/29/2018 10:15:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea, I agree with you, (about the complete words rhyming) ... I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one, as it was my first stab at this form. I have read all your soupies and will reply them all soon! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/27/2018 9:44:00 AM

Sounds great, Gregory. GL

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/27/2018 4:11:00 PM

Thank you, Line!

Roy Pett

Date: 1/26/2018 6:21:00 PM

This is an exceptional Tyburn Gregory, GL in contest, a winner for me. :))

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/27/2018 4:11:00 PM

Very kind of you to say so, Roy - thank you so much, my friend! :-)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/26/2018 8:12:00 AM

I've got tingles, I do, and I like them! Could stare at the picture for a good while and be perfectly content, then read the poem which matches perfectly. A combo delight, Greg! All the best ... CayCay

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/27/2018 4:10:00 PM

Tingles are GOOD, CayCay! So pleased you enjoyed this one, as it is very special ... blessings, my friend - thank you SO much! :-) <3