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Sleigh Passengers

Christmas finds reindeer landing on rooftops Santa’s kindly added some extra stops His sleigh filled with travelers Scared of TSA handlers Scoff as coal through government chimneys drops *For Francine’s Christmas contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/9/2010 10:25:00 AM

It is the season to give thanks...I wish to thank you for your support and friendship this past year (2010) Carolyn. May you and yours have a wonderful Holiday Season and may the New Year (2011) bring you and yours good health, and may your hearts be overflowing with love and happiness. Love and blessings always, Carol

Rinki Nandy

Date: 12/8/2010 12:59:00 PM

They bring embarrassment with a public appearance, are thoughtless about the victim, are boundless, hence they are selfish. Also, they are without emotion some times, a manipulator such a function of theirs puts them in the "fake" bracket. I however, strongly agree that tears are extremely powerful and beautiful. Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Christmas" contest Carolyn. Love, Rinki Nandy.

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 12/7/2010 2:35:00 PM

Great Christmas thoughts Carolyn,Thanks you for the comment on my moms b-day.your friend Teresa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:10:00 PM

Congratulations to you, Carolyn. One of the few limericks in the contest that I am seeing!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2010 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Christmas" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 12/6/2010 4:44:00 AM

enjoyed reading your work today, thanks for your wonderful comments on my poetry, i am proud of you too mum, son.

Leon Wilson

Date: 12/6/2010 3:48:00 AM

Well done on your 7th place win Caroline. God Bless and a Merry Christmas. Leon

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/5/2010 11:46:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS,I love this lovely fun limerick.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/5/2010 8:20:00 PM

Many congratulations for this true picture portrayal. You deserved this win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2010 3:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 12/5/2010 2:45:00 PM

true write my friend good to be reading your work once again cheers your friend John

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/5/2010 9:22:00 AM

I have no idea what TSA is so will have to go and look it up. If it has to do with government I would guess it is a shot at them. God Bless Phyl

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/5/2010 5:11:00 AM

Congrats my deaR POET FRIEND on your win in Francines first contest...luv Michael

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2010 4:38:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this political controversial topic...Reads like a winner to me..I was delighted that you stopped by to let me know that I placed in the contest..Sara

Noel Villarosa

Date: 12/4/2010 10:44:00 PM

Congratulations, Carolyn for your well deserved win on this contest.(^_^) Noel.

Sidney Beck

Date: 12/4/2010 4:25:00 PM

well done! congratulations on your win Carolyn.......very funny............ I had to check the meaning of "TSA" on google, its not widely known outside the US.......limericks are always good laughs...sincerely Syd.............oh by the way I do not live on a farm, but I am certainly (like John Denver ) a country boy at heart

John Freeman

Date: 12/4/2010 4:11:00 PM

Way to go lady, that's an idea to avoid the TSA, Smile. Congratulations Carolyn. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/4/2010 3:47:00 PM

This one made me laugh, Carolyn!! A fun limerick and a timely "hot " topic!! well done!! Congratulations! ~ love, Carrie

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/4/2010 2:50:00 PM

someone a littl annoyed at the airport?? love it Carolyn thank you for supporting my contest and congrats on your 7th place win

James Fraser

Date: 12/4/2010 7:01:00 AM

Very apt Limerick, good luck in Francine's Christmas contest >> James :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/4/2010 6:53:00 AM

haha --what a surprise they'd be getting with coal in their stockings! I hope that Santa's sleigh won't be overloaded, though ;) Witty limerick for Francine's contest, Carolyn :) -- hugs nikko :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/3/2010 9:08:00 PM

Nice take on the tsa situation.. never thought of the Santa hitch hikers as a way out of it! heehee. Good one Carolyn. Good luck in the contest/

Suresh Iyer

Date: 12/3/2010 11:10:00 AM

Nice Poem. Wish You Happy Christmas well in advance. cheers suresh

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/3/2010 8:54:00 AM

Carolyn, you sure had me laughing with your witty limerick.. All the best for Francine's contest ;-) hope your week has been a good one.. Love Wilma

Daver Austin

Date: 12/3/2010 7:29:00 AM

Hooray for Santa. Is this the right reaction? Love, Dave