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Sleepy Head

it’s countless the ways your sleepy head steadies me the moonlight shines on your hair the number of wisps only brilliance of God knows in dreamy state, i feel safe

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/7/2023 10:49:00 AM

Such soothing and gentle imagery my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2023 10:19:00 AM

Thank you, Jerry!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/6/2023 1:28:00 PM

I liked this, Kim. Very 'dreamy'...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2023 2:52:00 PM

Thank you <3

Ink Empress

Date: 10/6/2023 9:44:00 AM

This is soul warming, absolutely love the way you’ve written this. In dreamy state i feel safe too. And i love the imagery too,

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2023 11:59:00 AM

Thank you, sweet poet!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 10/6/2023 8:26:00 AM

If it makes you happy, dream on. lovely poem. Hugs and blessings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2023 11:59:00 AM

Thank you! Hugs & blessings, dear one!