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Sleepwalking

Slow wave sleep stage in a state of Low consciousness with Eyes wide open, as if awake, Even though make no mistake, if Performing activites With normal energies Appear with glazed expressions Likewise make no suggestions. Known causes unknown... Inherited or environmental zone. Nothing like alcoholic blackout... Generally, eating or sexual workout July 29, 2018 July 31, 2018 - Sleepwalking Contest By John Hamilton Fifth Place

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Virginia Waters

Date: 8/2/2018 4:53:00 AM

good take on subject - really enjoyed this one

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/2/2018 3:25:00 PM

Thanks.

Fauxcroft Wade

Date: 8/1/2018 3:28:00 AM

Great piece of Acrostic poetry and well deserved win. Love it. Faux

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/1/2018 6:05:00 AM

Thank you!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/1/2018 2:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Susan. Nice Acrostic

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/1/2018 6:04:00 AM

Thank you!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/31/2018 2:56:00 PM

Back to wish you congratulations!

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/1/2018 6:03:00 AM

Thanks, Michelle!

John Hamilton

Date: 7/31/2018 9:52:00 AM

Congrats Susan!

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/1/2018 6:03:00 AM

Thank you!

Joseph May

Date: 7/31/2018 9:47:00 AM

Congrats on your win Susan..

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/1/2018 6:01:00 AM

Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2018 11:32:00 PM

This is quite unique Susan! We all have such different perspectives which makes reading poetry a joy! Loved this!

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/30/2018 3:10:00 AM

Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2018 3:41:00 PM

sexual workout. That last part was sure unexpected!! It's such a strange phenomenon. I don't believe I have ever walked in my sleep, have you? (hmmm, I drove in my sleep once. That did not turn out too well!!)

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/30/2018 3:09:00 AM

No, no sleepwalking. Driving while asleep? That's beyobd scary!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/29/2018 3:00:00 PM

Great descriptions, especially "known causes unknown," enjoyed this! (also I posted a 'thank you' to my poetry soup friends and since you're one I hope you check it out!)

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/30/2018 2:58:00 AM

Thank you! Ohhh of course I will. :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/29/2018 12:57:00 PM

Love it Susan , love the line, nothing like alcoholic blackout. Good luck . Tom

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/30/2018 2:57:00 AM

Thanks, Tom.