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Sleepless Sheepless
Awake still~~sheperd had lost all his sheep for I shall want as they do
2020 August 24 *4th Place* When plans dont go to plan ~~Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/30/2020 3:01:00 PM
Congrats in the contest, and as usual, I sure enjoyed the picture you put with it. You are a master at finding great illustrations to go with your poetry
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/30/2020 3:07:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, glad you enjoyed those pics, Aloha! William
Date: 8/29/2020 1:25:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning line, William :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/29/2020 1:34:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, for your kind share, Aloha! William
Date: 8/29/2020 11:11:00 AM
Great imagery in just one line Monoku,William . Congratulations on your win.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/29/2020 11:19:00 AM
Thanks, Eve, for the enlightenment, Aloha! William
Date: 8/29/2020 3:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/29/2020 9:50:00 AM
Thanks for the opportunity, Aloha! William
Date: 8/24/2020 9:50:00 AM
Wow! you paint the picture with words: your monoku speaks without the actual pic.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2020 10:40:00 AM
You humble me, I am glad for it, stay well and Aloha! William
Date: 8/24/2020 7:09:00 AM
Enjoyed! Humorous!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2020 9:25:00 AM
Lol, Kim, thanks and Aloha! William

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