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Written, October 10, 2024
For The Contest, “Alliteration Nursery Rhyme”
Sponsor, Eve Roper

Sheep Sam could not seek sleep that night as storm sounds crashed and clashed; the thunder blasted booms while bright bold beams of lightning lashed. So sadly, Sam said, “We can't sleep- the big booms bash so loud!” But then, they heard a chirpy cheep- a true tweet in their crowd! “Oh yes”, said Sparrow Sue, “You know this scary storm won't last; it helps the green grass greatly grow as rich rain feeds it fast. So, ease your ears and eyes- think how our fading field of green will grow the coolest clover now our home has ever seen!” And so, the sleepless sheep slept well until the storm-free sun sent scents of their best breakfast smell- green grass and fine food fun!

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Date: 11/12/2024 1:34:00 AM
Brilliant poem and alliteration, congratulations
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Date: 11/7/2024 4:56:00 AM
Hey, Sandra. Congrats on the win!
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