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I met my husband in Valentine’s Day. My nickname for him is Prince.

Sleeping With Prince Charming

the curvature of two hearts, in sleep,
with oven-like warmth, philosophically deep.
comfort of your natural build and fragrance.
the vesper of your forever, charming essence.

2/13/2018

ROMANTIC CHARM IN 4 Lines
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thanks, Line!
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 6:41 PM
It sure beats sleeping with the enemy! Now I am reading that your nickname for your hubbie is Prince. That makes this one all the more meaningful. Did you show this to him? It sounds like you really lucked out with your spouse! Congrats (for that AND the contest win)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I did show it to him! He has a tough time understanding my poetry...lol
Cunningham Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Congratulations Kim ,I'm not surprised you're on the stage. Regards Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Thank you Tom!
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:22 PM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Thank you Anne Lise!
Smith Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:31 AM
How lovely Kim, congrats :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:43 PM
Thank you, Gary!
One Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Sounds so sweet Kim.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:43 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Pandit Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Your love flows through these charming lines..well done Kim..best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Thank you, my friend! <3 Kim
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 2:14 AM
- Romantic & charming, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Cunningham Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 10:42 PM
Another beautiful romantic verse, I'm glad I'm not the judge, Id have to give them all 1st place. Regards Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 10:47 PM
All lovely! Thanks, Tom!
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 9:52 PM
Charming 4-liner, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 10:25 PM
Thank you, Line :) Kim
Raynes Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 7:31 PM
this is such a nice read Kim, good luck in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 8:21 PM
Thank you, Lewis!
La France Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Kim, this is very nice and dreamy with love
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Thank you,Constance!
Michael Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 6:08 PM
This has the magic of reality all over it...A lovely dedication to your prince...Happy Valentine to both of you
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Thank you, Arturo!
Wanter Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:37 PM
You still have the heart to speak to your loved one like this! A precious gift.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Sunlite :)
Y. Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Hi Kim, This is such a beautiful and romantic piece. Valentine's Day is like an anniversary for you , cool.I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis! It really is an aniversary of 38 years :) ...Kim
Talbot Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Beautiful, a winner in my book! Good luck in the contest... Mick
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Thanks so much,Mick! Means a lot <3 Kim
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