Sleeping With a Dog

Sophie Dog presses Hard against my lower back, wanting the middle

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/18/2018 10:27:00 PM

Nice snapshot. You've captured the moment /-s. Well-written haiku!! ~Gershon

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/19/2018 12:15:00 AM

Thank you, I like haikus because it seems like more people read them.

Jessica Amanda Salmonson

Date: 3/18/2018 2:19:00 PM

We've four dogs, fortunately they're little, even at that they can almost crowd us out of the bed.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/19/2018 12:15:00 AM

Completely understood. It has happened to me!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/18/2018 9:59:00 AM

I can relate - my dogs sleeps in the bed too!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/18/2018 11:24:00 AM

Another thing to like about you, Michelle.