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Sleeping Volcano

Alone
Into the sunset
I find my place
Of soothing solitude
There on the shore
Of Crater Lake
The peace is a veneer
Serene and crystal clear
I swear I feel the tremors
Of a sleeping giant
Who rules the underworld
Not wanting to wake him
I pay my respects
With utmost reverence
In silence



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on December 30, 2018 for contest SLEEPING VOLCANO sponsored by EVE ROPER  -  RANKED 3RD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/25/2019 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations my friend!!
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Date: 1/25/2019 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Bobby. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/23/2019 9:40:00 PM
You have instilled a sense of serenity into your beautiful poem Line. I could feel the peace! Congratulations on your third place win! ; ) xxoo
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Date: 1/23/2019 11:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/23/2019 6:43:00 PM
Congrats Miss Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 7:13:00 PM
Thank you very much, Timothy. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/23/2019 3:15:00 PM
Line, beautiful poem with great imagery and feeling. Thank you so much for entering my contest. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. This was a fun contest, Eve.
Date: 1/3/2019 6:18:00 PM
They truly are "sleeping giants". Welled penned, it should do well. I love the description of "The peace is a veneer". Beautifully done.
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Date: 1/3/2019 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/1/2019 6:14:00 PM
Nice poem, good luck!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/1/2019 6:16:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 12/30/2018 10:52:00 PM
Excellent! I love the serenity!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/31/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.
Date: 12/30/2018 9:17:00 PM
WOW! Wonderful writing Line! Best of luck for the contest and wish you a very happy New Year! :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/30/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kaveesha. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/30/2018 8:53:00 PM
This is a lovely entry for the contest Line! I think Crater Lake is one of the most beautiful places on earth...especially in winter! Have a great New Year! : ) xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/30/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment, Connie.

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