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Sleeping Beauty

I walked into the castle Up on the hills and in the glens There she was dressed in white satin She was wide eyed and smiling The princess of sleep, mist of the morning A fantasy to keep She was an angel, all in virgin chiffon Her life a bed of white lilies She slept her years away In dreams of better days Her heart was tormented, grasping vitality Years and years did pass As suitors and kings came to see Wishing for the hand of a sleeping princess For she charmed them even in despair In her tower, alone, solitude her only kiss She wished for a knight in black armor To rescue her weary soul Travel to untold lands of happiness Where sleeping life’s sorrows were banned She dreamed of dances and musical romps Dreams that never came to pass As she slept her days away At dusk she’d wander off, away from the castle walls Never to return She walked into the marshy swamps Life was at an end She prayed the swampland ate her whole Never to be seen again The ogre saw this saddened soul and felt a twinge of fear For he cared about this sorrowful stranger As she woke to drown her sleep away This ogre could not bear Surprised he jumped and pulled her close Why do you, princess come here in despair? She looked up at this muddy smelly soul She smiled as the ogre saw into her wounded heart For she knew, from somewhere deep within She would never sleep again Dressed in the kingdoms finest robes She knew she was naked before his eyes The ogre was as shocked as she As he saw beneath her skin This he knew was the kindest heart The voyage was about to begin Together they marched heart in hand Happily sharing life’s torments

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/2/2014 8:36:00 PM
hey sugar, what a priceless fairy tale. I enjoyed the adventure of the sleeping beauty as she traveled a road that was not intended. A great mind you have to come up with a story so easy read and so deeply touching. great work my friend. :)
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Date: 4/15/2014 11:30:00 AM
Wow, Arthur, what a thought-provoking and brilliantly written poem. Too many people waste their years dreaming of things that will never happen. How wonderful that the princess saw the goodness in the ogre's heart. Enjoyed every verse, every line. A timeless write! Love, Carolyn
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/15/2014 9:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn, I Had fun writing this one!
Date: 4/12/2014 1:13:00 PM
A very lovely poem. How more beautiful it would be if it was true. I loved it.... Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/15/2014 9:33:00 PM
Hi Lucilla, hope you are getting well, an its nice to believe in fairy tales sometimes!!!!
Date: 12/2/2013 8:30:00 PM
I love fairy tales, love and best wishes Elizabeth
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2013 8:11:00 PM
So do I, thanks for your nice comments
Date: 12/2/2013 10:22:00 AM
A very romantic and dreamy like write, Nicely done beautiful. and thank for your ba-hum-bug comment. lol
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/2/2013 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Cheryl!
Date: 12/2/2013 9:55:00 AM
Love it.! Beauty and the Beast.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/2/2013 6:59:00 PM
Bien sur, as the beast I know my role well!
Date: 12/2/2013 9:06:00 AM
beautiful write Arthur..I enjoyed the read...thanks for stopping by...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/2/2013 6:58:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comments Joseph, much appreciated
Date: 12/2/2013 4:57:00 AM
- Arthur, thank you for an enjoyable adventure. - Troll is not bad or malicious ..... deep down in the soul, they have a good heart. - Have a nice day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/2/2013 6:58:00 PM
thank you Anne Lise!!
Date: 12/2/2013 4:45:00 AM
Fantastic philosophical thoughts on love and romance, arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/2/2013 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Dr, much appreciated!

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