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Sleeping Beauty

I walked into the castle
Up on the hills and in the glens
There she was dressed in white satin
She was wide eyed and smiling
The princess of sleep, mist of the morning 
A fantasy to keep


She was an angel, all in virgin chiffon
Her life a bed of white lilies
She slept her years away
In dreams of better days
Her heart was tormented, grasping vitality

Years and years did pass
As suitors and kings came to see
Wishing for the hand of a sleeping princess
For she charmed them even in despair
In her tower, alone, solitude her only kiss

She wished for a knight in black armor
To rescue her weary soul
Travel to untold lands of happiness
Where sleeping life’s sorrows were banned
She dreamed of dances and musical romps

Dreams that never came to pass
As she slept her days away
At dusk she’d wander off, away from the castle walls
Never to return
She walked into the marshy swamps

Life was at an end
She prayed the swampland ate her whole
Never to be seen again
The ogre saw this saddened soul and felt a twinge of fear
For he cared about this sorrowful stranger

As she woke to drown her sleep away
This ogre could not bear
Surprised he jumped and pulled her close
Why do you, princess come here in despair?
She looked up at this muddy smelly soul

She smiled as the ogre saw into her wounded heart
For she knew, from somewhere deep within
She would never sleep again
Dressed in the kingdoms finest robes
She knew she was naked before his eyes

The ogre was as shocked as she
As he saw beneath her skin
This he knew was the kindest heart
The voyage was about to begin
Together they marched heart in hand

Happily sharing life’s torments

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/2/2014 8:36:00 PM
hey sugar, what a priceless fairy tale. I enjoyed the adventure of the sleeping beauty as she traveled a road that was not intended. A great mind you have to come up with a story so easy read and so deeply touching. great work my friend. :)
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Date: 4/15/2014 11:30:00 AM
Wow, Arthur, what a thought-provoking and brilliantly written poem. Too many people waste their years dreaming of things that will never happen. How wonderful that the princess saw the goodness in the ogre's heart. Enjoyed every verse, every line. A timeless write! Love, Carolyn
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/15/2014 9:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn, I Had fun writing this one!
Date: 4/12/2014 1:13:00 PM
A very lovely poem. How more beautiful it would be if it was true. I loved it.... Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/15/2014 9:33:00 PM
Hi Lucilla, hope you are getting well, an its nice to believe in fairy tales sometimes!!!!
Date: 12/2/2013 8:30:00 PM
I love fairy tales, love and best wishes Elizabeth
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2013 8:11:00 PM
So do I, thanks for your nice comments
Date: 12/2/2013 10:22:00 AM
A very romantic and dreamy like write, Nicely done beautiful. and thank for your ba-hum-bug comment. lol
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/2/2013 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Cheryl!
Date: 12/2/2013 9:55:00 AM
Love it.! Beauty and the Beast.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/2/2013 6:59:00 PM
Bien sur, as the beast I know my role well!
Date: 12/2/2013 9:06:00 AM
beautiful write Arthur..I enjoyed the read...thanks for stopping by...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/2/2013 6:58:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comments Joseph, much appreciated
Date: 12/2/2013 4:57:00 AM
- Arthur, thank you for an enjoyable adventure. - Troll is not bad or malicious ..... deep down in the soul, they have a good heart. - Have a nice day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/2/2013 6:58:00 PM
thank you Anne Lise!!
Date: 12/2/2013 4:45:00 AM
Fantastic philosophical thoughts on love and romance, arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/2/2013 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Dr, much appreciated!

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