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Sleep Tight

Sleep Tight all his heroes wore costumes at night wrapped around all their muscles so tight his chances grew slim at an outcome so grim when his costume exposed – cellulite John G. Lawless 5/21/2015

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Date: 5/25/2015 3:44:00 PM
John, coming back here to answer the comment you gave me about your love of poetry and seeing forms when you judge. I hope my rondeau was one that served as a good model for you of that form. I just love rondeau!!
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Date: 5/24/2015 1:19:00 PM
Speaking of "sleep", I still need you to alter "sleep" to "sleek" on your comment on my poem "At the piano". Thank you... You can do this via your outbox. ******* I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 5/22/2015 4:52:00 PM
Oh Oh!!! Don't want THAT happening. hahaha.
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Date: 5/22/2015 2:47:00 PM
John, fun and funny Limerick, 7,and thanks for visiting my poem, sad tears, yes, I reached deep into my soul for that one
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Date: 5/21/2015 9:19:00 AM
Haha... we can not all keep that cellulite of our thighs a 7
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Date: 5/21/2015 8:57:00 AM
Wow that was not a pretty picture for my coffee this morning, John. Funny though!~jan
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