Sleep

Sleep softly, precious child. Tangled curls spread across white pillow. I reach to brush them back and caress the cheek so soft. So still and quiet in repose. An angel sent to brighten my life. This is when she touches my heart the most. The patter of feet and squeak of bed springs awakens me from my dream-filled sleep. Rubbing sleepy eyes, we arise. When I touch the tousled curls a smile brightens the face of my child, my life. As lovely now as it was when she slept.
by Francine Roberts for nette onclaud's 'Touch Me count-Up and Down' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Nette's fine contest Francine. Have a lovely Sunday....:)
Brown Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations Francine on your win in Nette's contest. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 11:34 AM
This is just awesome Francine!!Congrats on your win--kash
Phookan Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 11:24 AM
This was my fav on the theme of sleep. Awesome write ...Congrats Francine on your well deserved winning place.luv gautami
Devonshire Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 9:57 AM
I'm smiling, Francine. I enjoyed this poem just as much the second time around. Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 7:43 AM
Lovely. Many congrats, Francine : )
Mannan Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 6:07 AM
When I touch the tousled curls, lovely image. many warm congrats.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 4:55 AM
Congrats Francine on your great win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry my friend.. always a joy to read your dynamic words.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
K. Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 3:17 AM
This sure made me smile, Francine! Very sweet write on a child :) Really enjoyed this one too-- congrats on your win :)
Freeman Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 6:58 PM
Congratulation Francine on your success in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
Taylor Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 11:16 AM
Great entry, Francine. Excellent etheree. Enjoyed. Good luck. Happy Easter.( I made a slight change in my entry in your "Wow" contest. First line, "get" was changed to "great". ) Thanks xxxRalph
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April 22, 2011 at 12:25 PM
a great piece of poetry, enjoyed
Brumley Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 8:24 AM
A very lovely and tender write Francine, I'm sure it will do well in the contest:)
La France Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:44 AM
This is so beautiful, Francine, a winner for sure, and thanks for your lovely comments on my poetry~
Horne Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Lovely imagery, Francine. I guess Tuesdays are your Mondays then LOL
Johnson Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 11:58 PM
Great verse Francine... the image now I see it flow... much loved this girl ... but time does show... that she is lovely still... love Don
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April 20, 2011 at 11:48 PM
wow,Francine, this is so charming. I really enjoyed it. One of the best! As for that springtime Song, that was an old poem that I mistakenly entered because its title was so close to the one I meant to send you and I was in such a hurry to post my entry. thanks for the heads up or I would never have known I had done that. LUv, Andrea
Richards Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 6:41 PM
Oh....this is a delight to read!! The love pours from this sweet poem!! :)
Mehta Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Lovely expressions on the theme of sleep with tender and soft feelings, Francine
Devonshire Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 1:24 PM
This poem is so precious, Francine. Some folks joke that their children only appear angelic when they're sleeping, but this child sounds like a full-time angel. Such a tender and loving write for Nette's contest. Winning wishes are headed your way! The Key West trip is at the end of May. Now I'm fishing off the Florida Panhandle. through Easter. Can't wait for that Gulf Stream vacation! Love, Carolyn
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April 20, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Amazing poetry here!Best wishes.--kashinath
Nutter Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 10:54 AM
So well written and such a beautiful poem for the contest. One of the best I've read on the soup.
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