Sleep

The day that I died
he slept peacefully in his perfectly made bed. 

Firstly, my frozen finger’s bones broke
With whom I baked beauteously 
Then my dry eyes cracked like crackers 
Getting ferociously mauve like a sunset,
Fourth of July. 
My heart's pulse palpated with its last tick
Like a vintage clock on some subtle wall. 
The last breath came out sighing like a cloud Hiding from the ablaze sun. 
And I died, I died
While he slept peacefully in his perfectly made bed. 

He slept on clouds,
He didn't hear me choking on tears,
He had his blanket of dreams covering his eyes,
The dreams of his happy life and wife 
While I died, I died and I died. 

I died in the name of love,
I died for his silly smile,
I died for his lazy laughter,
I died for his coffee dreams
No coffee for me,
I'd sleep in a coffin. 
I sleep too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Buhagiar Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 10:28 PM
You died in heartbreak. So sad. Life may be better for you.✨
Godwin Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 5:32 PM
WHY CAN'T I FIND YOUR ICON FOR SOUPIES? I'd like to confirm that you received my message. (this seems familiar) LOVE
Godwin Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 4:38 PM
What an engaging, riveting poem. I focused intently on each line and was anxious to know the next. Your story image informs in such a well-crafted way that I am impressed. You draw it out beautifully by gifting enough 'more' to increase the pull that leads to a dramatic end that I personally didn't see coming. Because I'm me, I want to share that I don't understand the 4th line, cooking w/ bones would be 'which' so I'm unsure (my head?)
George Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 10:26 PM
You lie sleepless while the other one is sleeping comfy on his neatly made up bed. The one who broke your heart doesn't see your overwhelming pain or tears. This is heartbreaking. We all live in a cruel world. Turn away from the one who gives you pain. It may be difficult initially. But when you give yourself to other things that interest you, old memories will fade away. Dear Anne, this is a deep write, causing waves of sorrow on those who read it. Wish you joy!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 8:37 AM
WOW!!! What a write you have here. I enjoyed reading from the first line to the last line. I am buried with work after being off for 2 weeks for an Ink Transfusion. Hahaha!!! Now Back/Writing Away. I wish you would write more. Have a Blessed Week Writing Away...........
Rodgers Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 9:08 AM
Dearest Anne, "The day that I died he slept peacefully in his perfectly made bed." /// That contrast right there is the beating, bleeding heart of your poem. There is a specific, agonizing type of loneliness in watching the world, and especially the person who broke your heart, carry on completely undisturbed while your own internal universe is collapsing. The juxtaposition of his cozy "blanket of dreams" against the cold reality of a coffin is absolutely haunting. t takes immense bravery to look at that kind of isolating pain and mold it into something this expressive. Please remember that even when you feel like your heart has stopped ticking and you are lost in the dark, the voice in your poetry is incredibly alive, resilient, and deeply felt. Blessings, Dear Anne! Daniel
Empress Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 2:08 AM
Omg my heart hurts! I felt every word! I cant praise enough ~ just would love to fave this and say... I know the hurt of heartache. And i felt the most "I died in the name of love, I died for his silly smile, I died for his lazy laughter, I died for his coffee dreams" Felt that Sending you light always
Nicole Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 7:33 PM
' While he slept peacefully in his perfectly made bed, ' I cried and then died. I understand the emotions within, my dear friend. The heart of the one you love is floating beyond the clouds, and you're falling... sinking into the earth. Not a good feeling. Your thoughts always tug at my heartstrings. My best to you, Anne. Hugs and blessings. Brandy
Bayles Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 7:55 PM
Interesting point of view.
Anaya Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 4:45 PM
He has misplaced your love, while in his somber slumbering, one day he'll come to his senses, by then you'll of moved on to better things & places. A touching piece poetess~ Blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 8:18 AM
Mysterious, heartwrenching, a fave!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 3:28 AM
Great, even if sad emotions. It is a pleasure reading your poem.
Rolland Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 4:15 PM
this is heartbreaking, so well crafted, and so touching poetry, thanks you so much
One Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 1:23 PM
Oh wow.... I could feel your emotions in your poem and that is the true power of poetry.. To make people feel... you word choices are simple, but effective and you have written it in a way the reader resonates with you on your journey... I could feel the ache... Brilliant poetry...
Sharma  Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 9:27 AM
Woah, this is so heartbreaking, dear Anne! It's been a while since I've been here and read you and truly, your words moved me once again with their poignancy ~ "Getting ferociously mauve like a sunset" describing dying eyes like that! Oof! Really made me sigh.. sending you light and best wishes always..
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 3:41 PM
oh, how poignant and almost tragic. Thanks for sharing your vulnerability. wishing you well.
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