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Written on March 26, 2025

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feel the quiet, pouring over my thoughts the lingering dream, filling me up with a sense of peace and silence, flowing erasing the day with all its shadows all the pains of the past melt away, gentling the ache, the voice of twilight stirring in my spirit – a melancholic drifting telling me that this moment is the time before and after, this life is mine and every dream is alive, as my lids get heavy I feel the light liquefying, disappearing as night fills up my spirit and, with hope there is surely a heaven more inviting than the seduction of slumber’s respite feel the relief, restful and soothing silencing the mind with all its theories, all the beautiful that steals the music all the revelations of perfect and pure – wistful streams of melancholy flowing across the heart who hears glowing beyond the lonely tears reflecting the gentle despite the fears this is the place where hope bleeds through the spirit, awakening dreams who force the light in, breath life into the hesitant grasp dance of whispers, arising in the life who hears the angel sing… feel the serenity, a peace beyond description coloring the night in grace, breaking through the most intimate space, revealing what it means to see the joy blowing beneath winds who tease, always whooshing away the past, restoring the soul with a reprieve from the excitement living, amid the sparkle who glows beneath the silence, where love invites us to see through the tears, into the light a melody, flowing in rivers of insight beautiful dreams come to life as the stars wink at our aliveness and dusty trails of passing fantasies, amid the wonders of yesterday’s sagacity, a foreign note of healing, relief spiling from the spirit who can breath in… feel the impression of what is reality resting in the dreams, peace that need never leave – although the music bleeds memories, still, cool gentle fills my spirit gives my soul wings so I see beyond the musty prayers walk beneath the trembling praise to invite His light, flowing across my dreams, healing sharing a portion of what hope is, the miracles, the sensitive caressing my feelings, leaving me sure that He is with me, His presence revealing to me all the life that has been given by the wonder of a cross, forgiven… I fall to my knees, grateful love made a way and I can sincerely say beneath the night’s gray, eyes closed, heart awake I know the meaning of faith – it is the truth that sustains it is the beauty that stays it is the light that conveys the meaning of life – love love that never goes away love that is alive, forever, eternally mine and as I sleep away the night, I know this love will survive whatever comes, wrong or right – this love is the truth despite the lie that tells you love can die… love is forever, always alive love is eternal and became a sacrifice so you and I – we will never die and love will forever satisfy love will always be completely alive!

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Date: 3/27/2025 4:34:00 AM
Way to go with this winner. It got it just right. Congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 3/26/2025 9:20:00 AM
Wow dear sweet gina, you never run out of words! This is beyond beautiful and breathtaking how youv expressed here using elements of nature to depict such deep emotions and thoughts! I couldnt help but feel “ love is forever, always alive love is eternal and became a sacrifice so you and I – we will never die and love will forever satisfy love will always be completely alive!” perfect ending! Truly! This is a fave for me! Soul warming on so many deep levels! Sending you light always
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