Slayed

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I trace small loops there, (Your palm's soft center), Like swiping phone apps ... Your arm hair stands, stiff. Grabbing my finger, You squeeze tightly. I plunge your eyes - Swim their hot gleam. My slave finger To your mouth, You smile, sweet, Kiss the end ... Mind blown, I'm yours ... Slayed. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Any Theme Diminished Hexaverse" Poetry Contest, Charles Messina, Judge & Sponsor.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2019 3:12:00 PM

Congrats again with this one. It's one of my favorites of yours. Soupmail.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/2/2019 5:49:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea - I'm so happy you liked this one! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/28/2019 7:57:00 AM

Very steamy Greg! Many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/2/2019 5:48:00 PM

Many kind thanks to you, Jan, I so appreciate it, my friend! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2019 3:09:00 PM

Sexy one, Greg and a HOT win. Congrats

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/2/2019 5:47:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea! :-) <3

Charles Messina

Date: 1/27/2019 8:33:00 AM

The first version was great, Greg. But I like this one even better. The woman's not bad either (lol). Awesome write as usual. Congratulations on your 1st place win. And also, A very Happy Belated Birthday young man. Blessings...Charlie

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/2/2019 5:46:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Charlie, I am so honored and humbled by my placement and so pleased you enjoyed it! Blessings, My Friend! :-)

Carole Duet

Date: 1/26/2019 11:29:00 AM

...and your poetry 'slays' me...as usual. :D

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/26/2019 4:40:00 PM

That's very sweet, Carole, thank you so much! :-) <3