Slaves

Their upper lips stiff ... They kept their tongues to themselves ~ Waiting for The Day ...

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/26/2018 4:21:00 AM

Yes!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2018 10:33:00 AM

Ditto! ~ gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/25/2018 10:28:00 PM

Oh excellent sharp ink my friend. xomo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2018 10:33:00 AM

Was hoping that you'd think so, Dear Reader!! :) gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/25/2018 10:01:00 PM

Awesome, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2018 10:32:00 AM

Alright. What can I say? Much appreciated, Line. ~ Gershon

Charles Messina

Date: 10/25/2018 9:39:00 PM

Even today there are slaves biting their tongues...Excellent Senryu, Gershon. Makes one think...Charlie

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2018 10:32:00 AM

You know, you're right, C.M. Thanks for commenting and pointing it out. ~ Gershon