Mario De Paz Poet Rhyme

Slapstick Informatic On My Computer

With its bite or baud or bit
It takes thick my stomach strict
When the mouse is there clicked
Then my brain is hard constrict
And my thoughts are in conflict
With my hair rough or slicked
I feel as a lousy kicked
By a mangy cat then licked
And my will completely nicked
Was by case so subtly tricked
That I am like a drug addict
Even though I am afflict
As deserving to be convict
In a way I can’t depict
Neither I can rapidly evict
Nor I want it be hand-picked
Insofar I can predict
That no penalty is inflicted
To this slapstic informa-tìc!

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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 6:51 PM Mario, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA

John Lawless April 18, 2015 at 11:56 AM Nor would be dare restrict the ploy of humor to be tricked into the trap of slapping stick. Congrats on the win-though-it's-cracked.

Richard Lamoureux April 17, 2015 at 9:04 AM Well done! Mario De Paz April 17, 2015 at 12:41 PM Thank you for the encouragement. I only wanted to play with words as computer often does

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2015 at 10:15 PM Congrats on your monorhyme's win!! Mario De Paz April 17, 2015 at 12:24 PM Thank you, Andrea, it is a pleasure to win sometimes, but the real fun is writing

Jan Allison April 16, 2015 at 2:15 PM A fun write Mario - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Mario De Paz April 17, 2015 at 12:23 PM Thank you, Jan for visiting and commenting so nicely

Kp Nunez April 16, 2015 at 9:43 AM I clicked, and I was tricked, I thought it's dramatic, but oh it was slapstick! Loved it sire! :) Kim Mario De Paz April 16, 2015 at 10:33 AM Thanks for coming and commenting, Kim

Sara Kendrick April 13, 2015 at 5:55 AM This has a rap rhythm to it..The information is out there for all to lay a hand upon..Reads like a winner..Sara Mario De Paz April 13, 2015 at 6:04 AM Thank you Sara, it is nice to hear from you again. Thank for visiting

Poet Destroyer A April 13, 2015 at 12:53 AM i feel like my comment should end with a "ct" lol, i agree this was a fun read, enjoyed. love,p.d. Mario De Paz April 13, 2015 at 5:35 AM Thank you Linda for nice comment

Constance La France April 4, 2015 at 12:47 AM Mario, this was a fun read, love those end rhymes, just wonderful, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry Mario De Paz April 4, 2015 at 4:10 AM It is a joke with rhymes. I once wrote a similar one in my mother language to express a protest against the eccessive symbolism of informatic lexicon, but people did not like it. Thank you for the appreciation, your wings are far from be broken!