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Slapstick Informatic On My Computer

With its bite or baud or bit It takes thick my stomach strict When the mouse is there clicked Then my brain is hard constrict And my thoughts are in conflict With my hair rough or slicked I feel as a lousy kicked By a mangy cat then licked And my will completely nicked Was by case so subtly tricked That I am like a drug addict Even though I am afflict As deserving to be convict In a way I can’t depict Neither I can rapidly evict Nor I want it be hand-picked Insofar I can predict That no penalty is inflicted To this slapstic informa-tìc!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 6:51:00 PM

Mario, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA

John Lawless

Date: 4/18/2015 11:56:00 AM

Nor would be dare restrict the ploy of humor to be tricked into the trap of slapping stick. Congrats on the win-though-it's-cracked.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/17/2015 9:04:00 AM

Well done!

Mario De Paz
Date: 4/17/2015 12:41:00 PM

Thank you for the encouragement. I only wanted to play with words as computer often does

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2015 10:15:00 PM

Congrats on your monorhyme's win!!

Mario De Paz
Date: 4/17/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, it is a pleasure to win sometimes, but the real fun is writing

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2015 2:15:00 PM

A fun write Mario - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mario De Paz
Date: 4/17/2015 12:23:00 PM

Thank you, Jan for visiting and commenting so nicely

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/16/2015 9:43:00 AM

I clicked, and I was tricked, I thought it's dramatic, but oh it was slapstick! Loved it sire! :) Kim

Mario De Paz
Date: 4/16/2015 10:33:00 AM

Thanks for coming and commenting, Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2015 5:55:00 AM

This has a rap rhythm to it..The information is out there for all to lay a hand upon..Reads like a winner..Sara

Mario De Paz
Date: 4/13/2015 6:04:00 AM

Thank you Sara, it is nice to hear from you again. Thank for visiting

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2015 12:53:00 AM

i feel like my comment should end with a "ct" lol, i agree this was a fun read, enjoyed. love,p.d.

Mario De Paz
Date: 4/13/2015 5:35:00 AM

Thank you Linda for nice comment

Constance La France

Date: 4/4/2015 12:47:00 AM

Mario, this was a fun read, love those end rhymes, just wonderful, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry

Mario De Paz
Date: 4/4/2015 4:10:00 AM

It is a joke with rhymes. I once wrote a similar one in my mother language to express a protest against the eccessive symbolism of informatic lexicon, but people did not like it. Thank you for the appreciation, your wings are far from be broken!