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Slappy the Apple Tree of Oz - Wiz

SLAPPY THE APPLE TREE OF OZ - WIZ Dorothy and I go way back, don’t you know and by the way I’m familiar with the bale of hay, thundering tin can and the trembling kitty show. At first they were hesitant to let me stay. I had to pull my roots up from the ground, put a cafeteria net in place to hold its yield, then follow the yellow brick crowd ‘round and ‘round and avoid a screaming witch out in the field. She threatened to tear me limb from limb. I stuck out my red tongue, told her to just try. The knees of tin clattered together - poor him, and dear Dorothy and her little dog let out a sigh. I fell asleep standing in the poppy garden of snow. My apples were nearly poisoned but I shielded them before my eyes closed. Thankful for Glinda’s glow — awakening even the brave one with his absent brain stem. The growling yawn of the cowardly furball freaked me out. I shook the diamondback crystals from my leaves and trunk. Our Kansas girl led the way to Oz with a tree-mendous shout. For the millionth time we grab arms and sing - this time in funk. We reach the wonderfully luscious land of oz - green as my hair. Begging audience of the wizard, he finally sees us. I’m patient as he listens to the beggarly needs — a lion’s share. I won’t bring myself down to their level - make a great fuss. The wizard listens to this wizened curmudgeon tree. I ask him for unending sweet apples without any worms. And as he has done with the rusty-eyed gang, he makes a decree, for he must give a long winded speech and make us squirm. The only drawback is I must stand guard in this breezy courtyard — a lookout for writings on the skywall that might jeopardize our lives. Still, I am the crowned jewel, so humble, in this emerald vanguard. We sang and danced our way down the yellow brick and survived. 10/29/2018 Off To See The Wizard Poetry Contest Charles Messina - Sponsor In the Wizard of Oz, Dorothy gets slapped by an apple tree. This is where I came up with his name :)

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Date: 12/6/2018 5:56:00 AM
What a lovely story kim:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2018 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 12/5/2018 10:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this imaginative piece, Kim! Season's best! ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2018 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/5/2018 8:53:00 AM
Great imagination and imagery, Kim, I enjoyed reading. You did the same as I for the 2nd place. Thou I made the scarecrow scared .. ... .Congratulations on your 2nd place win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 12/5/2018 6:01:00 AM
Great take on the contest, Andrea. A truly enjoyable read. Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting my contest...Happy Holidays :) Charlie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2018 8:56:00 AM
Charles, I know you meant to say Kim! I enjoyed this contest. Thank you for sponsoring it!
Date: 10/30/2018 1:08:00 AM
Kim, you have summarized Dorothy's journey beautifully. What a wonderful snapshot of a rather long but terrific tale. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/30/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 10/29/2018 11:40:00 AM
Well crafted my yellow brick road friend...how many times can you say 'I was slapped by an apple tree'...great take, Kimmy...love & light...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 1:47:00 PM
LOL...thanks, dear WW!
Date: 10/29/2018 9:50:00 AM
This was enchanting and so very fun to read Kim. I love your take on this theme and your descriptions of the characters involved. I do remember that apple tree slapping Dorothy.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 1:42:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed, Chris! Wide open mornings are a great time to write. Thank you
Date: 10/29/2018 9:42:00 AM
An enjoyable tale. Good luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 9:43:00 AM
Thanks, Richard! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 10/29/2018 9:30:00 AM
That was adorable, being a fan of the story; I remember that scene. Great imagery; greater story. Thoroughly enjoyed this one.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thanks so much! :) Follow the yellow brick road!

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