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Slams Destroyed Her Head

Slams Destroyed Her Head

She was slammed by slam poetry, boo hoo!
Some folks wondered about the hullabaloo.
When bombarded with dread,
Sad thoughts destroyed her head.
Now, she thinks she’s a blithering cuckoo!

© July 17, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Dane Ann >> James
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July 20, 2010 at 9:17 AM
well done, enjoyed to the fulles,, some funny slams you guys got here,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your well deserved win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Anti-Slam Limericks". Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations, Dane Ann! I'm not surprised, 'cause you always rock!! Love, Audrey
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 11:02 PM
haha, this is pure silliness but it is funny!
Loving Iii Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 5:24 PM
who is this ? what contest? jhl
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Interesting thoughts penned in this one..Congratulations on the win in the contest..Sara
Fraser Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 1:58 PM
Haha, the poor cuckoo being tarred with imbiciles, poor bird. Congrats in Carolyn's contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations Dane, on a witty one's success. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Very witty, dear friend. Your rhyme scheme is wicked funny. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Cool, My Lady, Agape, Moses
Ryerson Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 12:30 PM
Right on the money, Dane Ann...first and last lines had me laughing out loud! I think you got a winner here! - Tim
Roberts Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 12:23 PM
funny one, good luck in contest
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