Poet Destroyer A Poet Rhyme

Slam of the Year

New Free Verse -YEAR
 
We are all gathered here
For what it's worth
It won't hurt
Let's just call this Free Verse
Dust off some dirt
Convert in my converse
My mini blue jean skirt
Topless with no shirt
 
Rocking & rolling
Bodies crashing 
Everybody's growling
I am just laughing
While (TPS) keeps on scoring
They keep on graphing
Overrun by their staffing
Pulling and strolling
What they got cooking & dashing
 
Noising up this summer
Crashing up my hummer
Bashing heads like a hammer
In and out like a plumber
Pounding bodies of armor
Jot down like a drummer
Moshing up this poetry pit
P.D. Came and took the glamour
Then the Soup turned around 
Slammed us- out of a form
Chopping my grammar 
This new free verse bumming form

By: P.D.

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Black Eyed Susan May 9, 2012 at 9:36 AM nice rhyming. I think you have a real talent for slams :)

John Loving Iii December 8, 2010 at 12:24 PM nice rhyming. john

Jezabella Singe October 1, 2010 at 10:35 PM you are awesome! i love your poetry!! you have a rythm that most people i know can't get into.

Andrea M Christian August 23, 2010 at 11:24 PM All I have to say is Wow! Amazing read-Fun in the sun with our tops down woo woo hmm yes *No tan lines*Bring on more [with poetry luv} Maizy~

Michael Gelb August 3, 2010 at 7:34 PM Good poem. And you used the word “nosh” it’s been years since I heard that word, my mom use to say it. Thanks for the comment on my poem “Deaths Door”. Yesterday at a bereavement group a woman had brought up about a friend had died from sleep apnea. I have sleep apnea and I wrote the poem today.

Lynette Chachere July 31, 2010 at 9:34 PM this is cool.haha..wouldn't it be nice to be topless in the summer! here you are, with new grammer. and yet you're still rocking. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Matthew Anish July 31, 2010 at 8:25 PM I go to readings here in NYC all the time but have only participated in one slam and that was enough. You sound like you had a pretty wild experience - although not a very positive one. Keep 'em coming! Yours Matthew Anish

Christopher Flaherty July 30, 2010 at 12:54 PM Evening destroyer Thank you for your comments , I have been reading others work and playing with numbers like you said crazy at the views other poets are receiving , 380 That my friend is crazy . Wow Cheers

Jessica Arteaga July 29, 2010 at 3:04 PM good one PD and thanks for your contest :D keep on writing these sla-i mean free ve- i mean rhy- o you know what i mean :P

Anthony Beesley July 29, 2010 at 11:29 AM good work you just inspired another insanity fire coming to a theatre near you soon

Adeola Yusuf Amuni July 29, 2010 at 8:58 AM I like this.It has a free flowing stylistic approach. Adeola Yusuf Amuni

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 28, 2010 at 10:33 PM dropping by to say hi & bye.... ttyl :) still as clueless about that comment about me being hungry?? hahaha I left that comment? well gtg :) super thanks for always dropping & re-dropping by my poems -- nikko :)

Harry Horsman July 28, 2010 at 2:26 AM where have i been to miss this, P.D this is so good, i need to get my act together. you're fortyfirst comment and deserving more. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 27, 2010 at 3:59 PM What a dynamic contest u had P.D. my BBF and it went as fast as my own Haiku and Senryu contests which the poets really like... good luck with judging and thankxxx for your special comments today.. well appreciated and always welcome ..your BBF..with luv..

Daver Austin July 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM "It get worse - topless with no shirt." Wow! this be extra sexy! How topless can you get? There are so many bashing and pounding lines that I like. Where to start. Big Love, Dave

Isa Mahrie July 27, 2010 at 10:18 AM hey i like it especially in the first verse ... seems it was a good time :) .... love to read this one

Daniel Cwiak July 27, 2010 at 7:56 AM Interesting write, P.D.! This is one that I will have to read and reread to pick up all the meanings that you have in here. As ever, thanks for your comments and have a good one! Dan C

Sidney Hall Mad Poet July 26, 2010 at 8:08 PM PD I wrote you a poem "Last Will and Tesament" Sorry and Goodbye

Ravindra K Kapoor July 26, 2010 at 7:34 PM Excellent and brilliantly composed a form on which you are outstanding and superb. Love and best wishes......Ravindra .......Poet D

Sheol Moribund July 26, 2010 at 2:07 PM Hi Destroyer: Cool and funk kinda poem!!! Thanx 4 reading and commentin on my poems. Have a great day. Peace: Sheol

Shannon Farlouis July 26, 2010 at 11:18 AM Great free flowing words.

Constance La France July 26, 2010 at 7:19 AM Well ~ it has stanza's like verses ~ it rhymes in all places ~ so it must be free verse ~ but gosh and darn ~ it sure looks like slam ~ and you do it the best ~

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2010 at 12:23 AM and who might the haiku master be? I have not got a clue, P.D. Anyway, I love your contest. The simple ones are so fun because immediately you see lots of entries. well, I'm OUTTA here. LUv, Andrea

Matt T. Love July 25, 2010 at 8:20 PM Lil Ms Destroyer, My request you ignore. I'm getting bored. I need some more. What are you waitng for? Great contest! I enjoyed it. You want to hear more about me. I'm nost scared to share. With faith there is no fear. With a push of a button. I'm always here... Nice write. Send me something. Excite my life!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 25, 2010 at 6:25 PM BRAVO P.D. on your brilliant contest..and congrats to all the great winners listed ..read all the wonderful entries.. awesome... thankxxx for your generous 6th place for "SLAM-VENT" my first attempt at Slam.. and look what happened.. the form got thrown off Soup..haha.. well this is the effect I have..haha.. good jub my friend and appreciate your courage and strength too.. always your BBF.. with luv..

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