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Slam of the Year

New Free Verse -YEAR We are all gathered here For what it's worth It won't hurt Let's just call this Free Verse Dust off some dirt Convert in my converse My mini blue jean skirt Topless with no shirt Rocking & rolling Bodies crashing Everybody's growling I am just laughing While (TPS) keeps on scoring They keep on graphing Overrun by their staffing Pulling and strolling What they got cooking & dashing Noising up this summer Crashing up my hummer Bashing heads like a hammer In and out like a plumber Pounding bodies of armor Jot down like a drummer Moshing up this poetry pit P.D. Came and took the glamour Then the Soup turned around Slammed us- out of a form Chopping my grammar This new free verse bumming form By: P.D.

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 5/9/2012 9:36:00 AM

nice rhyming. I think you have a real talent for slams :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/8/2010 12:24:00 PM

nice rhyming. john

Jezabella Singe

Date: 10/1/2010 10:35:00 PM

you are awesome! i love your poetry!! you have a rythm that most people i know can't get into.

Andrea M Christian

Date: 8/23/2010 11:24:00 PM

All I have to say is Wow! Amazing read-Fun in the sun with our tops down woo woo hmm yes *No tan lines*Bring on more [with poetry luv} Maizy~

Michael Gelb

Date: 8/3/2010 7:34:00 PM

Good poem. And you used the word “nosh” it’s been years since I heard that word, my mom use to say it. Thanks for the comment on my poem “Deaths Door”. Yesterday at a bereavement group a woman had brought up about a friend had died from sleep apnea. I have sleep apnea and I wrote the poem today.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/31/2010 9:34:00 PM

this is cool.haha..wouldn't it be nice to be topless in the summer! here you are, with new grammer. and yet you're still rocking. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/31/2010 8:25:00 PM

I go to readings here in NYC all the time but have only participated in one slam and that was enough. You sound like you had a pretty wild experience - although not a very positive one. Keep 'em coming! Yours Matthew Anish

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/30/2010 12:54:00 PM

Evening destroyer Thank you for your comments , I have been reading others work and playing with numbers like you said crazy at the views other poets are receiving , 380 That my friend is crazy . Wow Cheers

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/29/2010 3:04:00 PM

good one PD and thanks for your contest :D keep on writing these sla-i mean free ve- i mean rhy- o you know what i mean :P

Anthony Beesley

Date: 7/29/2010 11:29:00 AM

good work you just inspired another insanity fire coming to a theatre near you soon

Adeola Yusuf Amuni

Date: 7/29/2010 8:58:00 AM

I like this.It has a free flowing stylistic approach. Adeola Yusuf Amuni

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/28/2010 10:33:00 PM

dropping by to say hi & bye.... ttyl :) still as clueless about that comment about me being hungry?? hahaha I left that comment? well gtg :) super thanks for always dropping & re-dropping by my poems -- nikko :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/28/2010 2:26:00 AM

where have i been to miss this, P.D this is so good, i need to get my act together. you're fortyfirst comment and deserving more. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/27/2010 3:59:00 PM

What a dynamic contest u had P.D. my BBF and it went as fast as my own Haiku and Senryu contests which the poets really like... good luck with judging and thankxxx for your special comments today.. well appreciated and always welcome ..your BBF..with luv..

Daver Austin

Date: 7/27/2010 1:50:00 PM

"It get worse - topless with no shirt." Wow! this be extra sexy! How topless can you get? There are so many bashing and pounding lines that I like. Where to start. Big Love, Dave

Isa Mahrie

Date: 7/27/2010 10:18:00 AM

hey i like it especially in the first verse ... seems it was a good time :) .... love to read this one

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 7/27/2010 7:56:00 AM

Interesting write, P.D.! This is one that I will have to read and reread to pick up all the meanings that you have in here. As ever, thanks for your comments and have a good one! Dan C

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 7/26/2010 8:08:00 PM

PD I wrote you a poem "Last Will and Tesament" Sorry and Goodbye

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 7/26/2010 7:34:00 PM

Excellent and brilliantly composed a form on which you are outstanding and superb. Love and best wishes......Ravindra .......Poet D

Sheol Moribund

Date: 7/26/2010 2:07:00 PM

Hi Destroyer: Cool and funk kinda poem!!! Thanx 4 reading and commentin on my poems. Have a great day. Peace: Sheol

Shannon Farlouis

Date: 7/26/2010 11:18:00 AM

Great free flowing words.

Constance La France

Date: 7/26/2010 7:19:00 AM

Well ~ it has stanza's like verses ~ it rhymes in all places ~ so it must be free verse ~ but gosh and darn ~ it sure looks like slam ~ and you do it the best ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2010 12:23:00 AM

and who might the haiku master be? I have not got a clue, P.D. Anyway, I love your contest. The simple ones are so fun because immediately you see lots of entries. well, I'm OUTTA here. LUv, Andrea

Matt T. Love

Date: 7/25/2010 8:20:00 PM

Lil Ms Destroyer, My request you ignore. I'm getting bored. I need some more. What are you waitng for? Great contest! I enjoyed it. You want to hear more about me. I'm nost scared to share. With faith there is no fear. With a push of a button. I'm always here... Nice write. Send me something. Excite my life!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/25/2010 6:25:00 PM

BRAVO P.D. on your brilliant contest..and congrats to all the great winners listed ..read all the wonderful entries.. awesome... thankxxx for your generous 6th place for "SLAM-VENT" my first attempt at Slam.. and look what happened.. the form got thrown off Soup..haha.. well this is the effect I have..haha.. good jub my friend and appreciate your courage and strength too.. always your BBF.. with luv..