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Slam I Want Her As My Daughter In Law Son

You are thicker than summer night humid air
Sweating beneath a ceiling fan
Wishing it would stop

You are the Butterfly to my Moth

You love in spade's 
You make light of darker day's 
Of nothing have I ever seen you fazed
You buy me little treats at the end of every month
When you have been paid

You make washing dirty dishes a treat
You sweep me off my feet
Everytime our eyes cross
You make me tolerate my idiot Boss

You make me want children 
For you to be there Mum
You leave me overcome 
You make me accept who I have eventually become

You are the vision in my dream's 
You are the Pearl inside my shell
You hold my hand while watching horror movie's 
You shepherd me from harm
Your voice is my Monday morning wake up alarm

You offer me up your last tissue when I sneeze 
You make the greatest cup of tea
You take the day off work to nurse me when I am sick
You make everything in the world 
That used to confused me 
Finally,  Click

You never miss a trick

My 4 season's in 1 day
The Heroine in my unwritten play
Spring in early May
Sex with added birthday foreplay 

The reason my Mother said
Marry this girl my Son
Put a ring upon her finger
Before she comes to her senses 
I want her as my Daughter in Law

As much as I love you my Son

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Alexis Y.

Date: 7/5/2018 5:22:00 PM

Hi Christopher, I really enjoyed this touching write. I agree with Jan, you should print it and give it to him:-) Alexis

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 7/5/2018 5:37:00 PM

Cheers Alexis . Thank you so very very much for not only taking the time out to read my little poem but commenting as well. I am so grateful and thankful and appreciate it so much . Cheers Ta

Jan Allison

Date: 7/5/2018 5:05:00 PM

I hope you print this out and stick it under his nose Chris lol I LOVE it:-) hugs Jan xx

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 7/5/2018 5:30:00 PM

Cheers Jan thank you very much my friend .Cheers for commenting it is always greatly appreciated . No need for it to be printed out , it is imprinted into my brain an Ode to loss or what could have been if only I was not love blind and could have only seen for myself which every single day i now have come to miss. Cheers Ta

Lyric Man

Date: 7/5/2018 6:15:00 AM

:) love!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/4/2018 7:48:00 PM

Soooo awesome! ;)

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 7/4/2018 8:12:00 PM

Why thank you Maureen. Thank you very much glad you liked it thanks for commenting. Cheers Ta much appreciated