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Skyline Art To Home

Skyline Art to Home

Skylines
Puncturing clear blue blue skies,
Evidence of mankind’s rise,
Or fall.

Skylines
Winky, Twinkly, in dark black nights
Changing, changing ‘til dawn from twilight,
Low or tall.

Skylines
Wrapped in mystic fog of morn;
Vehicles forced to press on horns;
In a mood.

Skylines
Glued in cubist silhouette,
God’s glory colors in the west,
Weary workers brood.

Skylines
Never fail to instill a thrill
When first seen while driving still
Coming home.

Skylines
Familiar, welcoming with silent song,
You know you’re where you belong,
At home.

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Phil Capitano March 29, 2017 at 5:56 PM Funny how we see home differently when returning from a trip or journey of life. Very nice SW. Sunlite Wanter March 30, 2017 at 6:36 PM You're right. I get a sense of completion.

Anil Deo March 25, 2017 at 3:18 PM i can see so many connections - especially "home where we all belong," - in spirit or in reality. blessings. Anil Sunlite Wanter March 30, 2017 at 6:34 PM Thank you, Anil!!!

Lisa Ricci March 11, 2017 at 8:46 AM Hello Sunlite. Good Morning. You grace us with peace and tranquility and allow the reader to feel good. I love the thought and concept especially the last stanza. How true a thought. I very much enjoyed your entry. Well done throughout including title layout and presentation. Sunlite Wanter March 30, 2017 at 6:34 PM Thank you, Lisa! I really appreciate your comments.

Evelyn-Jane O'Heenan March 11, 2017 at 2:58 AM I love the imagery in the poem.This poem is really good! :) Sunlite Wanter March 30, 2017 at 6:33 PM Thank you!

Running Wolves March 10, 2017 at 7:00 PM Awesome take on city life. Skylines are awesomely beautiful. I used to live in Boise Idaho and at night I'd drive into the mountains and sit and watch the sun go down and the city light up. Sunlite Wanter March 30, 2017 at 6:32 PM That's similar to me, Robert when I lived in El Paso as a youngster, and our family would take a drive up the side of the low mountans and watch the night lights twinkle on in El Paso and Juarez.

Lynn Marie March 10, 2017 at 6:28 PM So beautiful. That feeling is second to none and your gorgeous poem expresses the warm familiarity of that wonderful 'knowing'... just divinely.:-) Lovely meaning, incredibly well penned. Love the title too! A delightful read...thank you :-) A fave, 7++++! many blessings to you :-) lynnxx Sunlite Wanter March 11, 2017 at 10:44 AM What a compliment! Thank you so much.

Grace Englebreeze March 9, 2017 at 11:04 PM This is an absolutely beautiful poem. The imagery is lovely, and the message is one that people really ought to think about more often. You are a very talented poet. ---Grace E. Sunlite Wanter March 10, 2017 at 6:16 PM Grace, I so appreciate your taking your time to comment, and so kindly, too.

Judy Ball March 9, 2017 at 6:39 PM Lovely When away we dream of home and the cozy feel of being where we belong. When coming home the first thing we see is the skyline indicating we are getting closer. A thrill of anticipation stirs. Great job here my friend. A fine write. God Bless and a big 7 from me. Thanks so much for dropping by my page. JB Sunlite Wanter March 30, 2017 at 6:31 PM Thank you, Judy. Sorry I'm so late. I love your comments. (and that 7!)

Chris Green March 9, 2017 at 8:29 AM I really love the form of this poem and the message seems so simple but I can assure you, it is something many of us take for granted. There is always something to see, something familiar on our daily treks. And it is so true, after a long day that skyline that we recognize as home, there is nothing more comforting and beautiful. Nicely done my friend. Sunlite Wanter March 10, 2017 at 6:15 PM Your comments are always so encouraging. Thank you.

Aurore Severo March 8, 2017 at 10:46 PM So sweet Sunlite Wanter March 10, 2017 at 6:13 PM Thank you!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 8, 2017 at 10:30 PM Oh this one speaks to me. Having an intimate relationship to my city as a bike courier for years and a birder always looking up, much of my art has revolved around skylines. Lovely write, 7 and a fave xomo Sunlite Wanter March 10, 2017 at 6:12 PM I am so glad you liked it. Thanks for that 7 and fave!

Tim Smith March 8, 2017 at 7:21 PM Amazing imagery...love it Sunlite Wanter March 10, 2017 at 6:11 PM You are appreciated!

CayCay Godwin March 8, 2017 at 6:48 PM This is absolutely, unequivocally, awesome! I love it. The Style. The Mood. The imagery. The feel. The facts wrapped in emotion's layers just beautifully. I have been touched! 7 Poetry hugs ... CayCay Sunlite Wanter March 10, 2017 at 6:11 PM You made me swoon. Thank you.