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Beautiful Stars In The Sky Wallpaper

Stars in the night I see
Scenery so sightly
Some are twinkling brightly
Small ones showing lightly
Staring at them nightly
Structure holds some tightly
Softly they delight me

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 8/2/2025 10:02:00 AM

Bill, that is beautiful and peaceful. Loved it. Thanks for sharing friend . Good day

Bill Baker
Date: 8/3/2025 11:18:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, Paghunda. Always nice to have you drop by my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/2/2025 8:41:00 AM

As your poem, you delight me. Very gentle and loving write. Well done. Every write does not have to be brain surgery. The twinkling lesson taken.

Bill Baker
Date: 8/3/2025 11:17:00 AM

Thank you, Joe. I'm learning that finally. Blessings my brother, Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2025 2:23:00 AM

Beautiful about which you have written. These are not so easy to write but yours is seamless. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Bill Baker
Date: 8/3/2025 11:15:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments, Sara. I appreciate your visits to my humble poetry, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2025 9:03:00 PM

Oh wow it's a rhyming pleiades

Bill Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 11:09:00 PM

Oops! I didn't notice, Andrea. How cool. :-) My mind thinks in rhyme most of the time. Thanks for the comment, my friend. Hugs, Bill p.s. you got a smile and a little giggle out of me.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/1/2025 4:31:00 PM

just beautiful and captivating poem, Bill. I haven't written a Pleiades in a while; you've inspired me with this one. Wish I could fave it. It left me breathless, hugs, me

Bill Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 11:12:00 PM

They are fun for a change of pace. Once I get going writing my sonnets, it's hard the write other forms ... except the short ones, like Haiku, Senryu, Kimo, Tanka or Limericks. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara. Hugs, Bill