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Sky On Land-Hiku

dawn gleams after night storm crystal sky flushed... sun bursts on flower spring shimmers radiant hues ripple in breeze... sunset sky lands November 22, 2021 Syllable count : Total 15 in each haiku (HMS) Contest : Hiku (Disciplined Brevity) Sponsor : William Kekaula

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Date: 11/22/2021 5:17:00 AM
Great imagery. I particularly enjoyed the line "hues ripple in breeze". Have a lovely day.
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