Freddie Robinson Jr. Poet Free verse

Sky Dancing

Looked out my window,
and saw a wondrous sight
Two cardinals in flight,
aerial dancing
Perfect mid-air pirouettes,
spiraling higher and higher
Two winged bodies in motion as one
They reminded me of you and I,
my love,
when we danced on the clouds,
among the stars that night
We fell in love that night,
sky dancing with you was sheer delight
We felt light as a feather,
floating above the trees
Our eyes gazing into each other eyes,
falling in love, rising higher
on a summer breeze through the skies
We danced so close together
until the morning sunrise
Night turning into day,
as we danced the night away
I never wanted to come down that night,
wishing with all my might
we could dance in the air again
Today, I looked out my window,
and saw a beautiful sight ...
two love birds sky dancing 
in the sunlight

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John Hamilton February 1, 2017 at 10:17 AM Such a wonderful write Freddie! Great imagery sky dancing lovebirds, how romantic! Really enjoyed this one!

Phil Capitano January 29, 2017 at 6:31 PM Gorgeous Freddie, love the bird/feather images.

Jannie Breedt January 29, 2017 at 1:44 PM Amazing how you open a can of memories and you take us back to the window again and the nostalgia is there still. A beauty my friend.

Wilma Neels January 25, 2017 at 6:29 AM Such a romantic gem Freddie, really enjoyed it :)

Afzal Nusker January 24, 2017 at 10:25 PM This is a lovely treat for lovers. Amazing poem, Freddie. A 7 & a fav.

Nette Onclaud January 23, 2017 at 12:29 PM such a poetic delight that allows me to sway with your images, freddie!..huggs

Heidi Sands January 23, 2017 at 11:54 AM Absolutely beautiful writing Freddie. What a sight! and you told this story so well too. Love it . A favorite. :)

Alexis Y. January 23, 2017 at 11:38 AM Hi Freddie, You have been penning some beautiful "love" poems lately. This one was no exception. It was so lovely and romantic. I must say I enjoyed the dance. A without a doubt seven: -)Alexis

DM Babbit January 23, 2017 at 10:25 AM May you forever be sky dancing. Loved this one.

Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 9:22 AM Such a beautiful and heart touching poem Freddie. I could see these two birds, bright red against a winter sky dancing as I could feel the emotions of the memories of a dance similar in your heart.