Debbie Duncan Poet Light Verse

Sky Dancer

As you look to the night skies.

There you will see her dancing.

Can you see her there as I do?

Dancing on moonbeams running wild.

With scattered clouds soft as a dove.

Dancing at twilight with stars up above.

I'd love to join her and dance at her side.

Then I could be a sky dancer, like her.

We could dance thru the heavens above.

We would grace the stars now and forever.

It would be so delicious to dance among stars.

With the heavenly dove from above, in flight.

We could dance thru the diamond dust and 

let the sparks fly all thru the night.     

As we dance along the magical milky way.

You would see grace and beauty in every way.

Dancing to the rhythm of the heavenly dove.

And everything would be right in the dawn's light. 




7pm   7/ 12/ 2013

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Michelle Mac Donald September 13, 2014 at 1:03 PM This feels softer than the Aura borealis, where it might have felt more electric and hasty. Truly love this subtle and romantic write, Debbie! Wishing you the best; this is superb! Keep well, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2013 at 12:57 AM Wishing you a very merry Christmas, sweetie!!

Phyllis Babcock November 5, 2013 at 10:54 AM Wish we could dance to the heavens that way and what wonderful sights we would see. Love your thoughts on this lovely poem. love phyl Debbie Duncan November 5, 2013 at 3:47 PM Thank you phyl ;}

Robert Pettit October 27, 2013 at 3:58 PM Are you describing a constellation here? This is a fascinating write.

Linda Jackson October 26, 2013 at 8:29 PM Lovely poem and brilliant imagery. Best wishes Linda x Debbie Duncan October 27, 2013 at 12:46 AM Thank you for coming to read Linda ;}

John Posey October 1, 2013 at 12:15 PM With wings that flutter so effortlessly - You dance through the shining stars with me - And comes the dawn we part once more - to meet again on nighttime's shore..... That was fun!..... Love ya dearly.... Jake

Ken Carroll October 1, 2013 at 4:30 AM Hi Debbie, A stellar write here...Thanks for visiting my verse earlier.. Ken

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2013 at 1:09 AM Hi, Debbie, I have to hurry to bed/ otherwise, I'd try to track down a poem of yours I have not seen yet! thanks for your comment on "good grief" actually I LOVE pepperonis. hahaha!!

Karen Anglesey September 29, 2013 at 8:48 AM You have created such elegant imagery. "dance thru the diamond dust" adds to the heavenly quality :)

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2013 at 11:37 AM whoo, i wanna ride with you, debbie... enjoyed this floating, marvelous work!..:) huggs

Len Gasun September 20, 2013 at 6:01 AM Wow! A magnificent write this is my dear friend Debbie. I enjoyed reading it this evening. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poem with me. Thanks also for your precious time to visit and your nice comments. Have a great day! love lots and hugs, Leonora Debbie Duncan September 20, 2013 at 11:48 PM Thank you Leonora ;}

Laura Breidenthal September 18, 2013 at 2:48 AM Beautiful imagination. I love the visuals of your compositions. This one in particular is captivating. Keep up the brilliant work! Always, Laura Debbie Duncan September 18, 2013 at 10:30 PM Thank you Laura ;}

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2013 at 5:18 PM a magical and beautiful poem!!! (and as for my lonely widow, I do not really know one specifically like that but I am sure there are many) Debbie Duncan September 17, 2013 at 10:51 PM Thank you so much Andrea ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen September 17, 2013 at 1:54 PM - Debbie, I love this one !!! Well done my friend. - A beautiful poem !!! . All the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan September 17, 2013 at 5:18 PM Thank you Anne ;}

Keith Bickerstaffe September 17, 2013 at 11:44 AM Delightful! '...dance thru the diamond dust,' I LOVE that phrase especially!! (great alliteration.) Wonderful imagery and magical word use. Well done Debbie! Best wishes, Keith (PS thank you for your sweet remarks!)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2013 at 9:07 AM Very enjoyable piece of work,bbie Debbie Duncan September 17, 2013 at 10:04 AM Thank you ;}

Harry Horsman September 17, 2013 at 6:47 AM This is lovely Debbie, Debbie Duncan September 17, 2013 at 10:52 PM Thank you harry ;}