Sky

I was only ten when I first fell in love surprisingly with the vast blue sky, the sky was very near to me then almost within the reach of my tiny hands as if I could easily touch it or smell its fragrance. Its changing colour used to take me in a world where I built palaces of childhood dreams those childhood dreams had the wings of Pegasus, and I used to talk to the sky for hours, my mother smilingly called me sky-crazy and my father predicted about my bleak future, my friends used to pull my leg. Now after so many years I have proved my father's prediction wrong and some of my friends are jealous about me, but I don't have the time now to look at or talk to the sky, only occasionally I can see it now through my back view mirror~ gradually distancing itself from me. ==============000==============
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Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Just loved how you ended this, I hope all is well I have missed you. How is the haiku writing going? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 2:30 PM
Looking back......we often see things so much more clearly.... but do take the time to keep the sky in view, Kash....as know that you do! It is what gives you such inspiration to write these beauties! (I don't know how I missed this one before......but I love it!) ;)
Oyewole Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 11:37 PM
It's good to know you proved your father's prediction wrong. Congrats on your win. AO
Brown Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 11:27 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest Kash. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 4:35 AM
i've always loved this, kashi.. yeahhh, congrats on your fine win!..:) huggs
Williams Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 2:24 AM
Kash congrats on your win, I love how the story progressed from child to modern day man too busy for the simple things in life, sums most of us up I think..David
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 4:47 PM
YESSSS. BIG Congrats. you know how i love this one.
May Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 2:16 PM
very nice Kash...congrats on your win
K. Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 10:56 AM
Hi kash! I really enjoyed reading this poem-- I haven't read this before and I really liked how you took upon your "childhood sky" here-- I could relate to it on some level and that second stanza, especially the last line was quite memorable, a bit of sadness there with the contrast but definitely left an impact. Super congrats on your win :D
Prabhu Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 9:09 AM
very nice write .loved the way u ended with the last two line. congrats on your win...~ sashi
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Free Verse~Poem" contest Kash. Love, Carol"
Sweetheart Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:57 PM
congrats Kash on an amazing write and win luv .. such an extraordinary piece luv..
A   Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:51 PM
KASH~CONGRATUALTIONS! with your free verse poem *^* thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:44 PM
I remember this one well, Congratulations for your win, Kash. I've always thought it was a really good one of yours.
Guha Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 5:35 AM
Very nice work. Its beautiful. Loved reading it! :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 9:20 PM
Kash, about what you asked me earlier, this is one that could maybe do well in the contest. I think it was just one line I was not crazy about. "my friends used to pull my legs"(change to "leg" because it's a slang expression that uses singular leg) I really like this one a lot. I had soupmail for you in case you didn't know.
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 1:04 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Nette's "At This Age" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 11:55 AM
CONGRATS KASH ON FIRST PLACE WIN.. TREASRED PIECE LUV...
Williams Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 2:21 AM
Kash congrats on your win, I loved this first time around..David
. Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 2:21 AM
wow, congratulation kash! this is simply a wonderful piece for the theme that speaks of love, longing and something closer to this age... lost. beautiful indeed
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January 14, 2012 at 12:14 AM
Congratulation on your superb win in the contest. bl
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 10:46 PM
Congratulations on your MUCH deserved win. this one was incredible,Kash. soupmail.
Macmillan Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 8:11 PM
Great poem and congrats on the win. The last line had me hanging on to the write, unwilling to look away. I liked the play of that line, especially, since it is you who are distancing yourself from it. Smiles from Cyndi---PS, I chatted with the sky just now and it misses you terribly. As soon as you read this, please give it a long look and silently, if you must, tell it a secret.
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 6:12 PM
what a bang up verse such a great moral ending too congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
Song Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 5:48 PM
Congratulations to my Bengali brother!!! You are a sky gazer--that is why u write such outstanding poetry...every day there is another poem in the sky to write....your pen writes of its beauty so well. Hurry up and type below this contest name...Kashinath Karmakar---1st place!! Applause! Gwendolen
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