Skirmishes With a Pen

I sit and wait. I was here yesterday. 
Sitting. Waiting. 
Dead air. Bereft of sound

Suddenly, faculty for perceiving sound 
is returned, and loud blown is the Gjallar
horn as Heimdallr guides my pen and 
all in Valhalla shall sing once more

Technically  flawless, an opportunity  
to state my case before a jury of 
disheveled Quavers or Couplets

Light and shade, tinged with solar flares.
Forgotten chords brought into focus
like a mammoths trunk pushing 
through ice

Born from a deserted ghetto, 
notes travel through a sieved mind
and flow down a river of ink to lie 
on a staff of competing candidates.
Repeated, like a stanza's refrain

Eventually, this piece of presented 
integrity shall be read by the corrupt, 
listened to by the judgemental and 
edified by the moribund and obsolete. 

Those tut-tutters arriving home from Sunday church,
with their angled wrecking balls of slanted beliefs, 
having already secured their forgiveness; proceed to 
tear  the larynx out of this persistent little song bird

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/8/2015 4:29:00 AM
About discernment and the struggle to create it would seem to me. Can we ever be satisfied with the judgement of others or even that of ourselves? It would seem not, for we shall be '...read by the corrupt and edified by the moribund and obsolete.' We'd do better to be satisfied with our own end result, regardless of others. Keith
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Terry Robinson
Date: 12/8/2015 5:57:00 AM
Very well summed up Keith. If you want two of my poems to read that I recommend, try 'the Blacksmith's Crucible ' and 'once was a Killer '
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