Skippin' Rock Blues

In childhood,
my near age cousin
well, he stuttered,
same's the sprinkler
in Grandpa’s garden.

Times my insides
stirred and shuddered, yet
tch-tch-tch-tch-ch-ch-ch-ch garnered
in this buddin’ gut
a calm percussion;

We two        unique, 
us ragamuffins,
only in communion 
contra-crust of family cliques,
drifting in to tough'ning up;

I hated my red mane,
he hated talkin.
With cocked head, I said,
“Your twitched tongue is
awesome, like skipping rocks
at the lake."

An affected glance,
brief mutual look,
my red face matching pate,
awaited his lips to skip.

"Y-y-y-y-your hair’s 
l-li-li-l-l-l-li-l-like c-c-copper,"
he smiled, like a rising penny sun.
He stood somewhat taller
then threw one last stone 
into his Pa-pa's ample pond.

Thought we'd marry,
told’m so,
he was two years older,
I, in third grade,
had high hopes.

“L-l-l-laws against it,”
he explained.
Broke my heart;
two of us
forever changed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 4:52 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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