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I have swum The limitless abyss Of your eddying indigo eyes And yet ... There are other Deep, dark boundaries to delve Of the landscape, You Just as enigmatic And just ... As warm. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Late December 2018 Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 12/20/2018 11:59:00 AM
Being submerged in the waters touch, even if for a moment- is certainly enough, to create a blissful mood. Congratulations Greg, on this win. :) Brandy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 6:47:00 PM
That's very beautiful, Brandy, thank you so very much for your sweetness and friendship, Dear Poet. Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 12/18/2018 10:37:00 AM
Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 6:46:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Funom - blessings! :-)
Date: 12/18/2018 7:49:00 AM
A deep dive and swim for the ages! Wonderful winner, GRB! Season's best. ~ Gershon
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 6:46:00 PM
That's very kind, Gershon, thank you so much! :-)
Date: 12/13/2018 9:10:00 PM
I was stunned by the photograph, before I arrived at the ever-so-stunning poem. I have no words; both are beyond that for me.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/16/2018 3:11:00 PM
Oh, that's very sweet of you, Caren, and I greatly appreciate it ... blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/12/2018 10:59:00 AM
Becoming lost in love, Greg, penetrates the soul! Brilliantly composed my friend! : ) xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/16/2018 3:10:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Connie, thank you very much! :-) <3
Date: 12/12/2018 6:22:00 AM
A stunning poem of passion, Gregory, and the picture adds to the impact. Nicely done, my friend.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/16/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carolyn, that's very sweet of you, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/10/2018 9:24:00 AM
Love! Soup mail...
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/10/2018 1:32:00 PM
Gorgeous! <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/10/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thank you, Mo! :-) <3

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