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Sketch of a Dream

Nature is a sketch of the tenuous hold we have on formidable time. No season stands immutable - each an interlude - one to another. Demurely, summer gives way to Fall. Bereft of leaves, brittle branches rattle against a crisp blue sky. When winter enfolds us all we dream; the collective dream of spring. Eight word sketch For John Hamilton 10/31/17 3rd Place

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Date: 3/6/2018 8:09:00 PM
You sketched this one perfectly Suzanne :)
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Date: 11/15/2017 3:20:00 PM
Just saw your note to me. Keep that muse stirring!!!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/15/2017 5:03:00 PM
Thanks Andie. Your creativity is amazingly constant. You must feed your Muse chocolates. Lol
Date: 11/8/2017 7:16:00 AM
beautifully and artfully portrayed Suz
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/15/2017 5:31:00 PM
Thanks from my heart. Forgive my late response. I really appreciate hearing from you.
Date: 11/5/2017 7:34:00 PM
This is so gorgeous, Suz. I love it!!! oh, and I see congrats are in order. I sure hope it scored high!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/6/2017 6:26:00 AM
Morning Andrea: I was happy to see you and thanks for your encouragement. My Muse is finally stirring again. I find Fall to be amazingly inspiring. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 11/4/2017 9:30:00 AM
Back with congrats SuZ!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/6/2017 6:29:00 AM
Thankyou Dear Vijay I appreciate your kindness. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 11/4/2017 8:37:00 AM
How you managed to use all eight words so perfectly in so few lines is a feat of brilliance. Congratulations and well done, Suz.
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Date: 11/3/2017 8:50:00 PM
So well done Suzanne, all eight words succinctly written with amazing flow, congrats on a fine win!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/4/2017 5:52:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words, John ....and my placement. I enjoy your challenges. SuZ
Date: 10/31/2017 8:15:00 PM
Amazing how you managed to get the eight words into this short poem--the dream lives on--best for a win SuZ!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/6/2017 6:39:00 AM
Dear Vijay: I appreciate your comments more than you can know. THANKS from my heart. SuZ
Date: 10/31/2017 7:17:00 PM
Beautifully done Suzanne. A smooth flowing cascade of poetic expression. Good luck in the contest!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/6/2017 6:42:00 AM
Dear Susan: I appreciate your encouragement and kind comments. Thanks for your good wishes. SuZ
Date: 10/31/2017 5:27:00 PM
Wow SuZ, this is a perfect entry for the contest. It flows so smoothly. I hope to see it a top winner!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/4/2017 5:54:00 AM
Thanks Connie: I appreciate your encouragement and friendship, always. Hugs, SuZ

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