Sketch of a Dream

Nature is a sketch
of the tenuous hold we have 
on formidable time.
No season stands  immutable - 
each an interlude - one to another.

Demurely, summer gives way to Fall.
Bereft of leaves, brittle branches rattle
against a crisp blue sky. 
When winter enfolds us all we dream;
the collective dream of spring.

Eight word sketch
For John Hamilton
10/31/17
3rd Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Thomas Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 8:09 PM
You sketched this one perfectly Suzanne :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Just saw your note to me. Keep that muse stirring!!!
Delaney Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Thanks Andie. Your creativity is amazingly constant. You must feed your Muse chocolates. Lol
Cornish Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 7:16 AM
beautifully and artfully portrayed Suz
Delaney Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Thanks from my heart. Forgive my late response. I really appreciate hearing from you.
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 7:34 PM
This is so gorgeous, Suz. I love it!!! oh, and I see congrats are in order. I sure hope it scored high!
Delaney Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 6:26 AM
Morning Andrea: I was happy to see you and thanks for your encouragement. My Muse is finally stirring again. I find Fall to be amazingly inspiring. Hugs, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Back with congrats SuZ!
Delaney Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 6:29 AM
Thankyou Dear Vijay I appreciate your kindness. Hugs, SuZ
Lane Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:37 AM
How you managed to use all eight words so perfectly in so few lines is a feat of brilliance. Congratulations and well done, Suz.
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 8:50 PM
So well done Suzanne, all eight words succinctly written with amazing flow, congrats on a fine win!
Delaney Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 5:52 AM
Thanks for your kind words, John ....and my placement. I enjoy your challenges. SuZ
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 8:15 PM
Amazing how you managed to get the eight words into this short poem--the dream lives on--best for a win SuZ!
Delaney Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 6:39 AM
Dear Vijay: I appreciate your comments more than you can know. THANKS from my heart. SuZ
Ashley Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 7:17 PM
Beautifully done Suzanne. A smooth flowing cascade of poetic expression. Good luck in the contest!
Delaney Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Dear Susan: I appreciate your encouragement and kind comments. Thanks for your good wishes. SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 5:27 PM
Wow SuZ, this is a perfect entry for the contest. It flows so smoothly. I hope to see it a top winner!
Delaney Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Thanks Connie: I appreciate your encouragement and friendship, always. Hugs, SuZ
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