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Skater On Moonlight

skater on moonlight
wearing diamonds, pearls in hair
fun in frosty air

moonbeams for sunbeams
darkly calm on frozen lake
glide softly as dreams

skater of starlight
feeling joy that comes from peace
hues stained black and white
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Love the description in first verse!
Buehler Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Your appreciation is very nice! Thank you. :)
DiMino Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 4:17 PM
Delightful, Evelyn; vivid and enchanting! A joy to visualize. Blessings.
Buehler Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 9:18 PM
Your kind comments are such a thrill, as ever, my friend. Thank you so much. ;)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 1:55 AM
Three magnificent haikus. So splendid in execution. So wonderfully written. Blessings.
Buehler Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 11:44 AM
So nice to read your warm remarks. Thank you. :)
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Splendid imagery my friend: skater on moonlight wearing diamonds, pearls in hair fun in frosty air--moonbeams for sunbeams darkly calm on frozen lake glide softly as dreams. Awesome! A FAVE!!
Buehler Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:44 AM
Thank you for your lovely remarks, and for the delight of your FAVE, my friend. :)
One Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:42 AM
You do these so well... always great imagery... moonbeams for sunbeams, i really like that one..
Buehler Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:42 AM
Thank you for the fine compliments, and the joy of your appreciation, Silent One.
Rolland Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 8:14 PM
delicious .poetry, with images so moving, enjoyed yann
Buehler Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 9:40 PM
Thank you for your gracious remarks, Yann. :)
Jones Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 5:22 PM
Love the imagery!
Buehler Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 7:02 PM
So nice to know, Karen. Thank you. :)
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