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Scintillating sun shines so sister Susie sunbathes seductively - sans swimsuit! Tautogram Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored By Eve Roper 10/23/19

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2019 4:55:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 9:22:00 PM

Gee Wiz JAN that's the 2nd 1st places today, I am going to keep count, Well done my poetry Sis!!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/30/2019 9:13:00 PM

Thank you so very much in taking the challenge of creating an Alliteration poem for this contest, Jan, you are always so creative. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/27/2019 3:01:00 PM

Ha, ha! Scintillating Susie's seductive stares stun Sicilians, San Franciscans, & Scotties! ~ Bikini Boy

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/27/2019 12:40:00 PM

My kind of sunbathing lol...great entry Jan...bol...^WW^ :o)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2019 11:42:00 AM

very cleverly done, Jan. I really like yours a lot.

Joseph May

Date: 10/27/2019 7:48:00 AM

Very nicely dome Jan

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/25/2019 11:08:00 PM

I actually have a sister named Susan (but she's never done that, I hope!) Great entry for the contest, Jan!

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/25/2019 2:07:00 PM

Sounds good to me! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Constance La France

Date: 10/25/2019 11:43:00 AM

Jan, sweet alliteration.. sexy sassy sister!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/24/2019 10:09:00 PM

Great job! I can't wait to try this contest - I love word challenges just as I'm sure you do. I bet you had a great time creating your splendid line. Love to ya ... CayCay