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Sizzling Summer

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Scintillating sun shines so sister Susie sunbathes seductively - sans swimsuit! Tautogram Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored By Eve Roper 10/23/19

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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2019 4:55:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bobby May
Date: 10/30/2019 9:22:00 PM
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Gee Wiz JAN that's the 2nd 1st places today, I am going to keep count, Well done my poetry Sis!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/30/2019 9:13:00 PM
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Thank you so very much in taking the challenge of creating an Alliteration poem for this contest, Jan, you are always so creative. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/27/2019 3:01:00 PM
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Ha, ha! Scintillating Susie's seductive stares stun Sicilians, San Franciscans, & Scotties! ~ Bikini Boy
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Winged Warrior
Date: 10/27/2019 12:40:00 PM
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My kind of sunbathing lol...great entry Jan...bol...^WW^ :o)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/27/2019 11:42:00 AM
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very cleverly done, Jan. I really like yours a lot.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/27/2019 7:48:00 AM
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Very nicely dome Jan
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/25/2019 11:08:00 PM
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I actually have a sister named Susan (but she's never done that, I hope!) Great entry for the contest, Jan!
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Matthew Anish
Date: 10/25/2019 2:07:00 PM
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Sounds good to me! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Constance La France
Date: 10/25/2019 11:43:00 AM
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Jan, sweet alliteration.. sexy sassy sister!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/24/2019 10:09:00 PM
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Great job! I can't wait to try this contest - I love word challenges just as I'm sure you do. I bet you had a great time creating your splendid line. Love to ya ... CayCay
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/24/2019 7:13:00 PM
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Sister Susie deserves a good licking! Aloha! Rico
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2019 2:54:00 PM
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Excellent alliteration, Jan...one of the best entries I've read so far. Hugs // paul
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/24/2019 2:23:00 AM
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You made this form look easy Jan. Good luck. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/23/2019 6:39:00 PM
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Jan, this is a cute poem, fun and creative!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2019 6:45:00 PM
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thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 10/23/2019 3:49:00 PM
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ha! this is adorable, jan!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2019 4:27:00 PM
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Thanks Ilene:-) it was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/23/2019 3:45:00 PM
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All the S's collaborated so well Jan, a pleasure to read. Blessings, Gordon
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2019 4:26:00 PM
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thanks Gordon:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2019 2:11:00 PM
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:))) ... thank you, Jan ... fits nicely to end "soup" today with a smile on my mouth :))) - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2019 4:09:00 PM
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thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2019 11:30:00 AM
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Saucy, sultry Susie sure sends me! :) gw
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2019 4:07:00 PM
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thanks GW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2019 9:15:00 AM
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I just hope that sister Susie is not susceptible to sunburn. : ) This was fun Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2019 9:20:00 AM
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lol Chris am so glad I don't have a sister called Susie - but I did have a goat of that name lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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