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Sizzling Summer

Scintillating sun shines so sister Susie sunbathes seductively - sans swimsuit!

Tautogram Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsored By Eve Roper

10/23/19

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Anne-Lise Andresen

October 31, 2019 at 4:55 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

October 30, 2019 at 9:22 PM

Gee Wiz JAN that's the 2nd 1st places today, I am going to keep count, Well done my poetry Sis!!

Eve Roper

October 30, 2019 at 9:13 PM

Thank you so very much in taking the challenge of creating an Alliteration poem for this contest, Jan, you are always so creative. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Gershon Wolf

October 27, 2019 at 3:01 PM

Ha, ha! Scintillating Susie's seductive stares stun Sicilians, San Franciscans, & Scotties! ~ Bikini Boy

Winged Warrior

October 27, 2019 at 12:40 PM

My kind of sunbathing lol...great entry Jan...bol...^WW^ :o)

Andrea Dietrich

October 27, 2019 at 11:42 AM

very cleverly done, Jan. I really like yours a lot.

Joseph May

October 27, 2019 at 7:48 AM

Very nicely dome Jan

Michelle Faulkner

October 25, 2019 at 11:08 PM

I actually have a sister named Susan (but she's never done that, I hope!) Great entry for the contest, Jan!

Matthew Anish

October 25, 2019 at 2:07 PM

Sounds good to me! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Constance La France

October 25, 2019 at 11:43 AM

Jan, sweet alliteration.. sexy sassy sister!

CayCay Godwin

October 24, 2019 at 10:09 PM

Great job! I can't wait to try this contest - I love word challenges just as I'm sure you do. I bet you had a great time creating your splendid line. Love to ya ... CayCay