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Scintillating sun shines so sister Susie sunbathes seductively - sans swimsuit! Tautogram Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored By Eve Roper 10/23/19

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Date: 10/31/2019 4:55:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2019 9:22:00 PM
Gee Wiz JAN that's the 2nd 1st places today, I am going to keep count, Well done my poetry Sis!!
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Date: 10/30/2019 9:13:00 PM
Thank you so very much in taking the challenge of creating an Alliteration poem for this contest, Jan, you are always so creative. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/30/2019 11:05:00 AM
Haha! Cute! Love it...
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Date: 10/27/2019 3:01:00 PM
Ha, ha! Scintillating Susie's seductive stares stun Sicilians, San Franciscans, & Scotties! ~ Bikini Boy
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Date: 10/27/2019 12:40:00 PM
My kind of sunbathing lol...great entry Jan...bol...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/27/2019 11:42:00 AM
very cleverly done, Jan. I really like yours a lot.
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Date: 10/27/2019 7:48:00 AM
Very nicely dome Jan
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Date: 10/27/2019 1:03:00 AM
You see them all over the world. Great alliteration. Hugs xx
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Date: 10/25/2019 11:08:00 PM
I actually have a sister named Susan (but she's never done that, I hope!) Great entry for the contest, Jan!
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Date: 10/25/2019 2:07:00 PM
Sounds good to me! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/25/2019 11:43:00 AM
Jan, sweet alliteration.. sexy sassy sister!
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Date: 10/24/2019 10:09:00 PM
Great job! I can't wait to try this contest - I love word challenges just as I'm sure you do. I bet you had a great time creating your splendid line. Love to ya ... CayCay
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Date: 10/24/2019 7:13:00 PM
Sister Susie deserves a good licking! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/24/2019 2:54:00 PM
Excellent alliteration, Jan...one of the best entries I've read so far. Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/24/2019 10:51:00 AM
Short... but very cute! Great job! :)
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Date: 10/24/2019 2:23:00 AM
You made this form look easy Jan. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 10/23/2019 6:39:00 PM
Jan, this is a cute poem, fun and creative!
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Date: 10/23/2019 6:45:00 PM
thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/23/2019 3:49:00 PM
ha! this is adorable, jan!
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Date: 10/23/2019 4:27:00 PM
Thanks Ilene:-) it was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/23/2019 3:45:00 PM
All the S's collaborated so well Jan, a pleasure to read. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 10/23/2019 4:26:00 PM
thanks Gordon:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/23/2019 2:11:00 PM
:))) ... thank you, Jan ... fits nicely to end "soup" today with a smile on my mouth :))) - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2019 4:09:00 PM
thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2019 1:55:00 PM
Haha love the cheeky ending! Hope she’s not a naughty nun type of sister!
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Date: 10/23/2019 4:09:00 PM
thanks Nina:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2019 12:18:00 PM
Sister Susie should sunbathe someplace secluded. I wish you all the best in the contest, Jan!
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Date: 10/23/2019 4:08:00 PM
lol she should Carol - when we were in Croatia we walked past a nudist beach - it was clearly sign posted and no one batted an eyelid:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/23/2019 11:30:00 AM
Saucy, sultry Susie sure sends me! :) gw
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Date: 10/23/2019 4:07:00 PM
thanks GW:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/23/2019 9:15:00 AM
I just hope that sister Susie is not susceptible to sunburn. : ) This was fun Jan.
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Date: 10/23/2019 9:20:00 AM
lol Chris am so glad I don't have a sister called Susie - but I did have a goat of that name lol:-) hugs Jan xx