Size Is the Culprit

Big brave fellow, I've brought you up well Behaved yourself but sometimes it was hell You kept flopping out Your size no doubt But you took inopportune moments to stand up and swell © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Breidenthal Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 5:06 PM
You are so good at this form! Brilliant one!!! Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 6:36 AM
Silly Jack... mucho love heading your way, dear Laura!!!
Wigley Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 11:16 PM
Mine looks like a willy, only smaller. Great write, Jack, and a worthy tribute to your mighty one-eyed trouser trout. Regards, Viv
Ellison Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 6:36 AM
My poem was naughty... your reply was naughtier!!! LOL "One-eyed trouser trout"!!! LOL
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