Sixty Eight You Are Kidding

Sixty-eight! What the heck. I look in the mirror and see another me.
I am twelve inside. Can’t anyone else see? 
My sense of humor is hilarious just like it always was.
I am young at heart; I still run from the fuzz.

I am a giant cuddly peace-loving hippie, who did not make it to Woodstock.
I would have but my parents would not allow it; which I think was a crock.
I was in high school then. I should have gone to Berkley.
But I wasn’t ready to leave my friends, so stayed home. Was still perky.

I want to tiptoe through the tulips, catch a ride with a communal VW van.
Painted with yellow happy faces, bubbly daisies and a peace-sign hand.
I will play a ukulele and sing folk songs louder and happier than Mama Cass.
Look at my face, my friend. Sixty-eight. Come on! I am a 17-year-old lass!

I see my eyes are fading. Arthritis makes me limp a bit when I walk.
But inside I am 19, a real beauty, with a heart that doesn’t squawk.
Sixty-eight. You’re kidding! At the most I am twenty-two or twenty-five.
I lived through assassinations, bombings, Viet Nam. It’s amazing I’m alive!

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Date: 10/7/2020 5:53:00 PM
This is wonderful Caren and of çourse you are nowhere near 68 my friend. I too have the same problem with some old dear who suddenly appears in my mirror nearly every day, even though I tell her to go away, haha ...love this Caren, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/8/2020 12:03:00 AM
Thank you so much. I look in the mirror and I say "What?" in pure disbelief, Ann.
Date: 9/20/2020 12:08:00 PM
happy birthday caren! i can relate to this poem 100% (but i actually did go to woodstock for 2 days). you have captured that feeling of disconnect between what we know and how we feel inside perfectly...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/20/2020 3:02:00 PM
Thank you very much. My birthday is May 31st but it is close to my half birthday which I also celebrate.
Date: 9/20/2020 11:26:00 AM
Hello Caren, age s a state of mind. it is good to feel young at heart. i do. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/21/2020 11:45:00 AM
Hello Caren, yes it is. Your welcome. Hugs.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/20/2020 3:02:00 PM
It sure is! Thanks.
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