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Six White Roses

The same striking man, the same lush, green land, cushioned and delighted her heart in sleep. Her romantic dream of senses was most grand unless repeated fears began their slow, dark creep; drowning and stabbing frights would often expand. She would then wake, shaken, and try to understand. This consistent dream had always just been. Each night, the familiar reel repeated with new chapters unfolding now and then. Six sweet, white roses were never deleted and repeatedly appeared at her dream’s end - always pure white of a love intense blend. She touched the new, glossy travel brochure, ran her fingers along the pictured tree, reminding herself that she was quite sure it was the same tree her sleeping eyes did see. This tree of certain enchanting allure is what urged on her travel towards tomorrow's tour. ********************************************** The guide led her slowly to the charming tree. Its presence moved her into a faint-type sway. When her trance-like eyes finally broke free they took in surrounding nature’s breathtaking array, and paused at her dream recalled mound of clay where six, white roses lay in a love intense display. Visibly shaken, the guide sat her gently down. Sitting, too, he began sharing an ancient tale. “Centuries agone, the prince loved a poorly maiden from town. Family, foes and doctrine bid this love to fail. They eloped, cloaked by soft darkness draped all around. He wore armor and his beauty wore her plain gown.” “They returned after six love-days of bliss. Only hours back 'fore his true love vanished. No sign, no clue, the prince sought all amiss and threatened the guilty would be banished. The prince finally found her in the sea’s mist with stab wounds he would not ever dismiss.” “He buried his love and also a spell in this clearing. He left no marker but a white rose for each day he and his wife had shared perfect, loving, pairing. So sure his spell would bring her near with love revered, he vowed to watch over her grave using spell's sway and to join her within three moons after she appeared." The guide asked, “how much longer do you plan to stay?” She glowed, “I must linger at least three moons after today.” February 13, 2016

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Date: 5/7/2016 4:41:00 PM
Caycay, nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
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Date: 3/19/2016 11:55:00 PM
CayCay, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/20/2016 3:51:00 PM
A beautiful, sad love story with a sweet twist at the end. I really like this , and the rhyme as well.
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:50:00 AM
Wow! Your imagination has been busy at work, CayCay! Great narrative and technically ably presented. Yes, the ending is meant to stir our curiosity! Best not to unveil everything....! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/20/2016 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paul - I love 'wow' comments! All the best ... CayCay
Date: 2/20/2016 8:03:00 AM
CayCay, your white roses are much more romantic than mine. Reminiscent of time travel stories I've read and oh so very beautiful. You must think about writing a sequel... I want to know what happened 3 moons and days later.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/20/2016 8:20:00 AM
It would be fun - I'd enjoy it. Stay tuned! And, I thank you for the encouragement!
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/20/2016 8:14:00 AM
Yes, I know, but I want you to write it...take me to the time and place when they see each other...again.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/20/2016 8:12:00 AM
Your words are wonderful to me! Thank you, Lin. You know what happens in 3 moons and days, they reunite and live happily ever after! All the best ... CayCay
Date: 2/19/2016 11:28:00 PM
I have to tell you, I am no expert on form and rules, I just read this and was spell bound, some poems aside from the story, just flow so well and this one of them! :)
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/20/2016 12:13:00 AM
Your words mean volumes to me, THANK YOU ... CayCay
Date: 2/19/2016 9:26:00 PM
wow, Caycay, you went to town with this challenge and invented an incredible love story. Mysterious and makes me want to hear the ending. Sure was nice to see you had left a great new poem here tonight.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/19/2016 10:29:00 PM
I'm so glad you liked it!

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