SIX WHITE ROSES

The same striking man, the same lush, green land,			
cushioned and delighted her heart in sleep.					
Her romantic dream of senses was most grand				
unless repeated fears began their slow, dark creep;			
drowning and stabbing frights would often expand.		
She would then wake, shaken, and try to understand.		

This consistent dream had always just been.				
Each night, the familiar reel repeated					
with new chapters unfolding now and then.				
Six sweet, white roses were never deleted		
and repeatedly appeared at her dream’s end -			
always pure white of a love intense blend.

She touched the new, glossy travel brochure,			
ran her fingers along the pictured tree,				
reminding herself that she was quite sure				
it was the same tree her sleeping eyes did see.				
This tree of certain enchanting allure					
is what urged on her travel towards tomorrow's tour.					

**********************************************

The guide led her slowly to the charming tree.			
Its presence moved her into a faint-type sway.			
When her trance-like eyes finally broke free			
they took in surrounding nature’s breathtaking array,				
and paused at her dream recalled mound of clay		
where six, white roses lay in a love intense display.			

Visibly shaken, the guide sat her gently down.			
Sitting, too, he began sharing an ancient tale.			
“Centuries agone, the prince loved a poorly 
maiden from town.  Family, foes and doctrine bid 
this love to fail. They eloped, cloaked by soft darkness 
draped all around. He wore armor and his beauty wore 
her plain gown.”		

“They returned after six love-days of bliss.				
Only hours back 'fore his true love vanished.				
No sign, no clue, the prince sought all amiss				
and threatened the guilty would be banished.			
The prince finally found her in the sea’s mist
with stab wounds he would not ever dismiss.”		

“He buried his love and also a spell in this clearing.				
He left no marker but a white rose for each day			
he and his wife had shared perfect, loving, pairing.
So sure his spell would bring her near with love revered,		
he vowed to watch over her grave using spell's sway
and to join her within three moons after she appeared."	

The guide asked, “how much longer do you plan to stay?”		
She glowed, “I must linger at least three moons after today.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 4:41 PM
Caycay, nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
A   Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 11:55 PM
CayCay, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
Inman Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 3:51 PM
A beautiful, sad love story with a sweet twist at the end. I really like this , and the rhyme as well.
Callus Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Wow! Your imagination has been busy at work, CayCay! Great narrative and technically ably presented. Yes, the ending is meant to stir our curiosity! Best not to unveil everything....! ~ Warm regards // paul
Godwin Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Thank you so much, Paul - I love 'wow' comments! All the best ... CayCay
Lane Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 8:03 AM
CayCay, your white roses are much more romantic than mine. Reminiscent of time travel stories I've read and oh so very beautiful. You must think about writing a sequel... I want to know what happened 3 moons and days later.
Godwin Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 8:20 AM
It would be fun - I'd enjoy it. Stay tuned! And, I thank you for the encouragement!
Lane Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Yes, I know, but I want you to write it...take me to the time and place when they see each other...again.
Godwin Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Your words are wonderful to me! Thank you, Lin. You know what happens in 3 moons and days, they reunite and live happily ever after! All the best ... CayCay
Vaso Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 11:28 PM
I have to tell you, I am no expert on form and rules, I just read this and was spell bound, some poems aside from the story, just flow so well and this one of them! :)
Godwin Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 12:13 AM
Your words mean volumes to me, THANK YOU ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 9:26 PM
wow, Caycay, you went to town with this challenge and invented an incredible love story. Mysterious and makes me want to hear the ending. Sure was nice to see you had left a great new poem here tonight.
Godwin Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 10:29 PM
I'm so glad you liked it!
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