Six Wet Wipes

He's scheduled for a colonoscopy Commode will soon fill with allotropy Only clear liquid diet This soon will be a riot Six wipes sent by a person who's loopy
Inspired by contest... Written: August 11, 2015 Allotropy..uh-lo-truh-pee...a property of certain elements existing in two or more distinct forms..There will be many elements in the commode..
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September 24, 2015 at 11:52 AM
Sara, Congrats on your win. Another interesting contest. LOVE SKAT
Wigley Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 7:41 AM
A worthy win for using surgical terms, very educational. Viv x
A. Sharma Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:34 AM
Congrats on ur eloquent winning write Sara!
Anish Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:56 PM
I am very glad that I had a colonoscopy. I had colon cancer about 10 years ago and recovered from it. Stimulating work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Muideen Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:36 PM
A well written piece, it so funny and interesting...Excellence........A.M.
May Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 5:50 PM
Nice limerick Sara ....hugs
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 5:47 PM
hahaha, GOOD JOB with THIS contest!!!
Guzzi Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 4:45 PM
UT OH! you are naughty one wise one! ;) Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 1:56 PM
i had that procedure but was knocked out from anesthesia... a fun , heartening read sara... huggs
Allison Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 1:04 PM
VERY clever humour Sara - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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