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Six of One and Half a Dozen of the Other

Boring lackluster monologue How my skin crawls When I hear platitudes And Six of one and half a dozen of the other Does take the prize For the ultimate superlative Epitome of all redundancies and platitudes Making my head silently implode Trying not to draw attention To how annoyed I become Hoping the source of my vexation Will one day fall into oblivion Really makes me laugh though Some day I could easily see myself Become teary eyed with nostalgia Thinking about my beloved late husband And how he used to love Using that most endearing phrase And how I loved him so AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 23, 2018 to contest LATE MAR 18 PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 3/24/2018 11:24:00 AM
What a sweet ink Line! Wonderful! My best to you in the contest, already a winner with me :) xomo!
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Date: 3/24/2018 11:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/23/2018 10:38:00 PM
A tender ending, which revealed so much of self; I feel honored to read this one, Line. Thank you.
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Date: 3/23/2018 11:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 3/23/2018 9:13:00 PM
I too, enjoyed this very much! Well done Line, and best of luck in the contest... Hugs :)
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Date: 3/23/2018 11:42:00 PM
Thanks, Akkina. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/23/2018 7:57:00 AM
Really enjoyed especially the end pondering!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/23/2018 11:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/23/2018 7:51:00 AM
nice presentation. Wishing the best, my dear poet. sanjay.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/23/2018 8:08:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and lovely comment, Sanjay.
Date: 3/23/2018 7:33:00 AM
Oh Line, I did not see where you were going with this one, so sweet!! xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/23/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mike. Much appreciated.

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