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six feet deep

the way you move the way you talk all captured as photographs the way you laugh the way you cry forever caught as memories but memories and photos are all I have, because between you and me all that remains is a broken friendship your gaze your smile will burn in my mind your name your scent I will never forget in vain for six feet deep you stay forever this way

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Date: 7/5/2021 11:41:00 PM
This is awesome. Never think my poem is not good. All poems are expression of thoughts, they stem from within, no poem can ever be bad. I found yours better than many others I read at poetry soup. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
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lani kdan
Date: 7/6/2021 12:22:00 AM
thank you,I'll try not to
Date: 7/5/2021 4:36:00 AM
Heart touching ending. Well penned friend. Welcome to poetry soup
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lani kdan
Date: 7/5/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thank you this was my first time writing a poem so I apologize if it’s not the best