Sitting On the Porch

air like a warm kiss crickets repeating their song rocking chair creaking children whispering secrets sweet evening reverie
7/12/11 For the Summer Evening contest
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Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 11:11 AM
V ery summery!! What contest was this? OH, yes, now I remember. Gosh, I think i never saw the winner list yet!! congrats. A well deserved win.
Fassbender Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 2:27 PM
One of my most favorite things to do...beautiful images, Barbara!
George   Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 11:22 AM
Beautiful Tanka, Barbara. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 5:47 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, Barbara
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 9:42 PM
Congrats BG on a wonderful win with this marvelous poem so sweetly penned luv.. enjoy...
Roberts Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 9:17 PM
congrats on your 7th place win in the contest Barbara
Delacroix Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 5:14 PM
Perfectly done! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.
Ball Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 5:34 PM
Oh Nice. This has a real good feel to it. Really good imagery. God Bless, JB
Warden Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 8:35 PM
mmmmm summer nights..Great writing..Good luck in contest..hugs
Aul Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Good luck in the contest, very well written........ .......George
Maverick Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 12:00 PM
And thats why they built porches in the 1st place..! wishing you a top spot with this good write Barbara..!
Peranteau Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 5:31 PM
Just sitting on a porch puts this soul in a trance dear poet ! *smiles* Loved this write, and great entry Barbara ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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