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Sitting Face To Face

Silence pindrop silence...... broken suddenly,by your mysterious emerald eyes' blinking! © 2011 kashinath karmakar (30th Dec,2010) =============================== Placement: 6th; (January 2011) Contest:Breathe in Silence Sponsor:Paula Swanson

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Onyebuchi Okonkwo

Date: 1/9/2012 1:13:00 PM

Congrats on reaching this stage. All the best in the contest, Kash.One Love~O.O.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2012 8:10:00 PM

congrats kashi on hurdling the first round of TPS contest..wow! here for you! :) huggs

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/4/2012 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Kash. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/28/2011 6:15:00 PM

There YOu are under P LOL so glad to see this fine write make it through the gauntlet! Congrad's Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2011 6:02:00 PM

One I really like made it thru round one. AWESOME, kash and congrats. I hope it gets farther!!

Madeleine Mclaughlin

Date: 6/28/2011 2:22:00 AM

Really nice, simple but with lots of POW!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2011 11:41:00 PM

happy toppers, kashi..congrats!! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2011 11:20:00 PM

Hey, good news to tell you as I go offline now. this just took first place in Brians' last contest and mine scored too!! (see page 9 I think) Congratulations!! Goodnight, now! Hope you got my reply to your hotmail! (you have to tell me if I guessed right or not!)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/17/2011 7:08:00 AM

So sorry that I missed this gem before, kashinath-- this is really cool and mysterious indeed-- those emerald eyes could be anybody's --so whose eyes are those?? spill already ;) I think it is so cool that you are writing in all these forms-- I think you're good with whatever form you tackle, way to go for you Kashinath! :) Will have to try this form soon! Enjoy your Sunday :D

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/17/2011 12:43:00 PM

Oh that sends a shiver down the spine or it could be your house cat which is not so bad. I imagine a big cat. God Bless Phyl

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/13/2011 4:19:00 AM

Nice change of style compared to the other poems in this contest. Enjoyed

James Fraser

Date: 1/6/2011 11:00:00 AM

Many congratulations Kashinath, on your win in Paula's contest with this little gem >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/5/2011 10:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath in the "Breathe in the silence" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2011 3:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this very descriptive work..Sara

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/2/2011 8:37:00 PM

Anamazing cinquain Kashinath. Many congratulations for this win.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/2/2011 5:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win in Paula's "Breathe in the Silence" Contest, Kashinath! Always, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/2/2011 2:36:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, Kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/1/2011 9:44:00 PM

Very imaginative, Kashinath. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/1/2011 8:51:00 PM

lovely cinquain. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/1/2011 8:17:00 PM

Congrats kashinath on your winning poem in the Silence contest with this incredible entry my friend.. enjoy with luv this first day of 2011...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2011 1:21:00 AM

just came here again and yes, I still love it!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/31/2010 7:12:00 PM

delightful!! blink now,, sure to be a good contender for the contest, kashinath... :0 nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/31/2010 1:22:00 PM

sweetly imaginative Kashinath and very lovely especially the emerald eyes blinking.. emeralds are my favorite jewel and my birth stone too.. if u check my TOYLAND blog u will find your entry Bike Ride won however the winners list is unable to post for 2011 just yet till the system catches up luv.. so congrats again..to u for a great entry .. your name is listed on my blog as Kashinath K... HNY..

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/31/2010 12:25:00 PM

Exquisite, Kashinath! Smooth energy..Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment for me! I'm wishing you a very Happy New Year with all the good things you wish for yourself! Love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2010 9:49:00 PM

oooh, this is GREAT!!!!