Sitting Face To Face

Silence
pindrop silence......
broken suddenly,by
your mysterious emerald eyes'
blinking!



© 2011 kashinath karmakar (30th Dec,2010)
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Placement: 6th; (January 2011)

Contest:Breathe in Silence

Sponsor:Paula Swanson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Okonkwo Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 1:13 PM
Congrats on reaching this stage. All the best in the contest, Kash.One Love~O.O.
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 8:10 PM
congrats kashi on hurdling the first round of TPS contest..wow! here for you! :) huggs
Brown Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Kash. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 6:15 PM
There YOu are under P LOL so glad to see this fine write make it through the gauntlet! Congrad's Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 6:02 PM
One I really like made it thru round one. AWESOME, kash and congrats. I hope it gets farther!!
Mclaughlin Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 2:22 AM
Really nice, simple but with lots of POW!
Onclaud Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 11:41 PM
happy toppers, kashi..congrats!! :) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 11:20 PM
Hey, good news to tell you as I go offline now. this just took first place in Brians' last contest and mine scored too!! (see page 9 I think) Congratulations!! Goodnight, now! Hope you got my reply to your hotmail! (you have to tell me if I guessed right or not!)
K. Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 7:08 AM
So sorry that I missed this gem before, kashinath-- this is really cool and mysterious indeed-- those emerald eyes could be anybody's --so whose eyes are those?? spill already ;) I think it is so cool that you are writing in all these forms-- I think you're good with whatever form you tackle, way to go for you Kashinath! :) Will have to try this form soon! Enjoy your Sunday :D
Babcock Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Oh that sends a shiver down the spine or it could be your house cat which is not so bad. I imagine a big cat. God Bless Phyl
Bagnall Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 4:19 AM
Nice change of style compared to the other poems in this contest. Enjoyed
Fraser Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Many congratulations Kashinath, on your win in Paula's contest with this little gem >> James
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations on your win Kashinath in the "Breathe in the silence" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Congratulations on your win with this very descriptive work..Sara
Mannan Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Anamazing cinquain Kashinath. Many congratulations for this win.
Haick Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Congratulations on your big win in Paula's "Breathe in the Silence" Contest, Kashinath! Always, Audrey
Mehta Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 2:36 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, Kashinath
Devonshire Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 9:44 PM
Very imaginative, Kashinath. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 8:51 PM
lovely cinquain. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 8:17 PM
Congrats kashinath on your winning poem in the Silence contest with this incredible entry my friend.. enjoy with luv this first day of 2011...
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 1:21 AM
just came here again and yes, I still love it!
Onclaud Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 7:12 PM
delightful!! blink now,, sure to be a good contender for the contest, kashinath... :0 nette
Sweetheart Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 1:22 PM
sweetly imaginative Kashinath and very lovely especially the emerald eyes blinking.. emeralds are my favorite jewel and my birth stone too.. if u check my TOYLAND blog u will find your entry Bike Ride won however the winners list is unable to post for 2011 just yet till the system catches up luv.. so congrats again..to u for a great entry .. your name is listed on my blog as Kashinath K... HNY..
Haick Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 12:25 PM
Exquisite, Kashinath! Smooth energy..Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment for me! I'm wishing you a very Happy New Year with all the good things you wish for yourself! Love, Audrey
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 9:49 PM
oooh, this is GREAT!!!!
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