Seren Roberts Poet Free verse

Sit Down Wind -Trickle Down Free Verse Contest

Why does Tilly*
break smelly wind
fed good food
best can buy
why I  wonder
do I try
to sustain levels
maybe I might
just only buy
any cheap meat
this might work
or just maybe
sit down wind
nostrils shut tight
breathe through mouth
sounds so uncouth
poor old Tilly
such a bind
that she has
wind that smells
so yuck

* Tilly my old rescued Boxer *****

Penned 17 July 2013 for trickle down free verse contest.

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Mustapha Mohammed July 28, 2013 at 3:54 AM Yes that can be a joy killer. Seren Roberts July 28, 2013 at 7:28 AM LOL you have experienced it too...Seren

Richard Lamoureux July 17, 2013 at 5:23 PM Perhaps you should install an exhaust sytem. It sounds like you need rescuing *lol*

Poet Tacito July 17, 2013 at 7:52 AM HA! This was charming! Yeah, that scent of the dog is not entirely welcome...ever. Perhaps if you fed it human food...? ;-) Nicely done!

Russell Sivey July 17, 2013 at 5:38 AM Ha ha, this is a very funny write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazingly humorous poem this morning! You are so creative when determining your subject matter for this piece, what a hilarious verse, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts July 17, 2013 at 12:49 AM Haha just realised they have ***** the word b i t c h Hmmm thats what lady dogs are called