Sirens On a Joy Ride

A Porsche squats by the side of the road, keys tucked in the ignition. We stare at the coupe with our salivating glands… this devilish hint revving our hidden pleasure. Slowly, slowly we cross the street on impulse, Roy and I open the door, gliding our bodies unto the pompous seats as wheels start the trip, reeling like a breeze. Not a soul in sight; this is a twosome joy ride! With nary a conscience, we ram this big-time treat; sliding a playlist right down metal -rock road. Then, boomed a noise louder than the soundtrack popping flamed lights, sirens in the distance… oh, we just wanted some naughty fun; but, men with badges are after us now. The timing and urge for adventure, too brief Our luck written on crisscrossed stars… beneath flashy neon, we got whacked, Roy and I hauled a thief’s runaway car! Carol Eastman's Humor Contest by nette onclaud... * from the perspective of two young men, partly fictional* 1/18/2015

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Date: 2/1/2015 2:49:00 PM
SWEET WIN...SKAT
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Date: 1/30/2015 1:49:00 PM
Congrats!!!( ( ( ) )).Sara
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Date: 1/29/2015 10:22:00 PM
Nette thats an amazing one ,, fun fiction ,, congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/29/2015 1:42:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2015 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette. 7 Hugs eve
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Date: 1/28/2015 11:18:00 PM
Congrats on win nette. God bless
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Date: 1/22/2015 5:44:00 PM
ah, the good old gladiator days. whimsically fun.
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Date: 1/20/2015 1:47:00 PM
I enjoyed this one; much luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/20/2015 1:18:00 PM
- I read your poem/story yesterday, dear Nette - Can not see my comments ...... or I'm getting senile ..... or forgotten to post? - I do not know ..... but, a really well written poem for the contest - wish you luck, hope it will be a win !!! - Now I'll read your new poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2015 6:38:00 PM
I definately felt like the moth on that windsheild ! Great ride...I mean write dear poet ! Sure have missed ya ! Have a great night Nette.....zzzzzoooooooom
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Date: 1/19/2015 5:58:00 PM
Whimsical write Nette..I enjoyed the read!
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Date: 1/19/2015 3:10:00 PM
Love the twist Nette - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/19/2015 2:10:00 PM
Love the twist nette...huggs
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Date: 1/19/2015 1:55:00 PM
trying to enjoy a ride is very hard while being followed by men with badges..nice story.. good luck my poetic friend..this should do well...next time be more careful whose car you steal
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Date: 1/19/2015 1:31:00 PM
Got a chuckle at the surprise ending..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:50:00 AM
Nette,this reminds me of some scenes from the film " Ferris Bueller's Day Off". A delirious, funny spin which knocks me down especially the twist in the last stanza. A roadshow of a poem!
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